if you want to support the artist:
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/102008490

the cover ,just like the dick demon

Base +5, MisterReaper +7

While a little odd for wording choices and grammar in spots, and feeling like it should be part of a series with at least 1 chapter before it, it is very nice.
the drawing is not bad by any means, and the pacing of the story is not bad. not amazing, but not bad by any means and you can properly see how things are playing out for the most part.
wish we could have had it a bit longer for a bit more playing out a few scenes more, but it very nice overall and i look forward to seeing either more from the author, or a series of this.

Base +8, Julio33 +6, MisterReaper +7, chanzy +9, R_T_A_N +6

The storyboards and dialogs of this are arranged from right to left, and the speech bubbles are mostly vertical, maybe the artist created a Japanese version first and then translated the English version... Still I wonder why the English version was released first...

Base +9, R_T_A_N +6

Translation needs work.

Base +6

I'd like to have a game like this story. Or other chapters before or after this story.

Base +7