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Happy end?

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Making those annoying Karens end like this is kinda ammusing.
Also shows how parents manipulate children.

Hal every day is getting more and more based.

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I like torture and stuff, but this just ain't it chief. Feels like the artist is just dishing out their frustrations with this. Kind of a "Karen" thing to do, really.

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lol at calling Hal a Karen.

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Sry bro, this aint good at all. even though the art is TOP.

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Fucking disgusting

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Would have rather they beat her senseless or at least let it be a clean amputation.

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I REALLY wish the kid weren’t there. Now she’ll have to deal with her crippled brain dead mom for the rest of her life, even if she does seem oblivious to it at the time. This is why I always preferred guro to ryona; there’s an emotional aspect of ryona that I could just never get into

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Hal once again making me feel bad for enjoying guro.

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hal, are you okay?

Girl, you need to relax just a bit.

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Ah, their's our playful little scamp, hal.

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@elarithon

I feel you, man. I jerk it to guro regularly, but the writing of this one just made me cringe. At least if the rapists were fat, unattractive neets, it would have made an inkling of a sense, but for some muscular "alpha males" who can rip off an arm like nobody's business to get so upset over some facebook mom's posts about porn in a bookstore that they end up raping and dismembering her just feels wrong, man.

Still came, though. Just wish it wasn't translated so I wouldn't have cringed at the same time.

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I'm usually pretty all in on guro but this one was tasteless in a way even I can't get behind

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the sex was good, but I don't like chopping her limbs off, break her mind then discarding her. If you're gonna chop her limbs off then you gotta take hold of her for the rest of her life, use her forever man.

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Nice one, all karens must be treated like this.

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Do yourself a favor and skip reading the comments on this one.

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Yeaaa dog, out of all of hal's work so far this is probably the first one that doesn't do it for me. Without the kid subplot, it would have been fine, but having her in there kinda sours the whole thing somehow.

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Hal is probably the most based woman ever.

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what a good daughter

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my theory is that hal got some karen mad at her doujins and is taking out her frustrations in the only way befitting of a top tier smut artist

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imagine seeking guro / ryona and then crying about it when you don't like it
learn to filter, fucking secondaries

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feels like hal's putting some strong opinions into this one.

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@Redmark
Oh, so people HAVE to like it? They're not liking it because the plot is trash, full stop.

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There are so many ways to respond to critiques and haters. This is definitely a way.

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Good ol’ Hal at it again

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Sounds like someone got triggered at someone calling hentai manga disgusting. Well, at least Hal used that frustration productively.

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I have mixed feelings about this one. Normally I'm a fan of both guro and ryona, but this one doesn't really sit well with me. I think it's the fact that the daughter is going to have to care for her mother for the foreseeable future. Her mom was neglectful, and it's clear from the fact he hasn't hired someone to care for his wife that the dad is also trash. It'd be one thing if the daughter was a direct victim of the attacks, but this specific outcome is upsetting in ways I don't enjoy, y'know?

That said, I really liked the art. And I enjoyed how the mom was a total asshole up until she woke up with none of her limbs. I don't really see enough characters who have attitudes like that. I just like variety and all, and the occasional character with an attitude even though that's just going to make their situation worse keeps me from getting bored.

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