VERY rough translation.

My 1st attempt at translating so i do expect there to be mistakes.

I do not own nor contributed to the artists original work. All ive done was attempt to translate and re-write it.

I didnt translate most of the other background text mainy because its more sound effects.

Beyond the janky TL, you really need to fix the grammar. Punctuation and capitalization is not optional.
Also looks like this is [JP-KR-EN] which means that the original intent is long gone.
Don't
Typeset
Like
This
You need to center align your text.
Lastly the font is hideous. If you're only going to use one font use something like wild words.

Base +13, JBHUTT +6

@funk

Thank you for the tips. I really appreciate it.
Like i said, this was my 1st attempt. I knew is wasnt going to be good. But we all start somewhere!

Just trying to get a feel for it and improve upon what issues people have with it and see if its worth trying.

Base +9

If you want to improve your typesetting skills here are some valuable recources for you:

https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main
https://mangadex.org/title/08e1f85a-bb12-4fe4-aec5-0d7a80b3a261/anonblack-s-typesetting-guide?tab=chapters
https://www.ruinevil.com/rawr/editguide/index.html
https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/

Base +20, gubot +12

@ Ancient-Alien

Much appreciated, ill take a look at them.

Base +9

I get that you're learning but have you tried proofreading? As in, taken a serious look at what you did and thought "I would want to read a release typeset like this if I found it in the wild".

Base +6, RandomDick +6

In the title, the クリ (kuri) is short for クリトリス (clitoris). The Japanese word for chestnut is in fact read as "kuri" which is why the translator you used the word chestnut.

Base +8, Zeratulxxx +7, gubot +12