only looked at the beginning pages

001
OG: くぅ…！予知と全然違う…！
TL: "Ugh! It's completely different from a prediction"
ED: her prediction

002
OG: わ…わたくし達を簡単に思い通りにできるなんて思わないでください！
TL: "Please don't think that we can do what we want so easily!"
ED: "Don't think you can make us do whatever you want so easily"

003
OG: あなた達はＲＲ団…私に従う奴隷…
TL: "You are the RR group...slaves to me..."
ED: Team RR?

004
OG: 私をどうにかできると思わないことね…
TL: "Don't think you can do anything about me with this..."
ED: "Don't think that you can make me do anything like this..."

005
OG: ま、いつまで保つか楽しみだね…
TL: "I'm looking forward to seeing how long it lasts"
ED: wrong pronoun

006
OG: さてどうしようか…負けた気もするけど数でゴリ押しかな…
TL: "Well, what should I do...I feel like I've lost, but I guess I'll just have to push it with numbers..."
ED: overpower her with numbers

008
OG: …っ！
TL: "Oootsu!"
ED: this is the sound of a surprised reaction

008
OG: まぁ…！ミヅキ様になんて態度を…！
TL: Oh my...! How dare you act to Mizuki-sama!
ED: she's talking about her attitude

009
OG: はいげんきのかけら
TL: N/A
ED: she's using a Revive

010
OG: ”あまいかおり”
TL: "Ama Kaori"
ED: "Sweet Scent"

011
OG: さぁ…体は敏感に…頭はとろけてきた…
TL: "I don't know...My body is sensitive...My head is melting..."
ED: wrong pronouns and さぁ here isn't "I don't know", she's trying to encourage her

OG: わたくしに全身を委ねて…
TL: "He entrusted his entire body to me..."
ED: wrong mood, wrong pronouns

012
OG: 女の園のタマムシジムにはそういった手合のトレーナーも少なくありませんから
TL: "There's no shortage of sparring trainers in the Tamamushi Gym in the Garden of Women"
ED: Celadon Gym (which happens to be a garden and only has female trainers)

Base +21, shiranai +7, Innocenteyes +6, Prof. Tree +9, dankestdungeon +22, Ahegaosensei +6

Cease this already.

Base +6, Ahegaosensei +6

Well he didn't put "English" in the title and it not being English isn't that far from the truth anyway...

Base +26, Anonimous1234567890 +6

I'm not sure if the Hypnohub translation is perfect but it's definitely a lot better than this.
https://hypnohub.net/index.php?page=pool&s=show&id=4975

Base +6, Glovelove. +29