original: https://e-hentai.org/g/2410216/3cf5d39b76/

Wait, you're the same uploader who uploaded the original English translation.

Why also upload a rewrite? What's the point?

Edit: Oh, it's just a nakadashi edit at the very end. How odd.

Last edited on 29 December 2022, 16:56.

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@weedlayer
seems like one panel change, not an actual rewrite as in the dialogues

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It's a redraw to remove the condom from a few panels and add the impregnation panel from another work, with like one line of dialogue changed at the end. It's barely noticeable and doesn't really feel like it justifies having a separate gallery.

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Actually some dialogue on page 18-21 were rewrite too

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@Boomer30569 It justifies a separate gallery because you know people would go ballistic if it was the other way and not clearly labeled as being edited from the original.
It’s not the original or a direct translation of the original, so it gets the full rewrite treatment. This is the way.

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I'm a sucker for impreg, I appreciate the edit.

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drugs/hipnosis/etc is for cucks, either vanilla or rape, anything else is for losers.

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