Heya. Happy New Years everyone. Sorry if the translation and redrawing's shoddy and I hope ya'll have a good year ahead of you.

Fapping to this while listening to Free Bird is such a mood

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Nijika My wife

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Happy New Year. Keep em Bocchi doujins coming <3

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Nijika is really sweet girl indeed, but it's amazing how quick she bacame the internet girlfriend

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only skimmed about half of it but you made up a lot of dialogue and sfx

003
OG: 対バンライブ！満員御礼！かんぱ〜い！
TL: "Successful band live! Full house! Cheers!"
ED: "successful band live" = Live battle of the bands

OG: ジュースおいし
TL: "We're cheering even though this is just juice..."
ED: she's saying juice is yummy

004
OG: 閉めから先に食べたい
TL: "I want to eat tonkatsu"
ED: she's just saying she wants to eat before the place closes

007
OG: ご飯作ってもらったしあたし皿洗いするよ
TL: "Alright, let me do the cooking for tonight. I'll go ahead and wash the dishes too."
ED: she's doing the dishes since he made dinner

OG: 家だと怒られるから聴けないんだ〜
TL: N/A
ED: she can't listen to her sister's songs at home because her sister gets mad

OG: やめろ！はずかしい！
TL: "Don't show him that!"
ED: missing detail, it's embarrasing

OG: ナルホド
TL: N/A
ED: you erased his response to her explanation

009
OG: こんな顔らしくないよね
TL: "I don't know...I don't like feeling like this..."
ED: she's rhetorically asking if she doesn't seem like her usual self

010
OG: 本当にするの…？
TL: "Okay, fine...but only because it's you"
ED: she's asking if he really wants to do it

011
OG: 一応着てみたけど…
TL: "Alright, alright. There. I wore it."
ED: she's saying she'll try it on for the time being

OG: ど…どう？
TL: "Eh? How old am I now...?"
ED: she's asking for feedback on how she looks

OG: 20にもなってはず～～～っ
TL: "I'm around 20 now I think."
ED: she rationalizing her actions using her age

012
OG: 暗い部屋にすればよかった
TL: "Even though the room is pretty dark..."
ED: she's wishing they did it in a dark room

OG: 自分の胸が好きにされてるの見るの恥ずい
TL: "It's still embarrassing to let someone else see my chest..."
ED: she's embarrassed to see someone else having their way with her breasts

013
OG: ちょっと臭い強いし… / 我慢できなくてあたしが来る前に一人でしたでしょ
TL: "It's a bit difficult to get it into my mouth..." / "and the taste is a bit strong too..."
ED: she comments on the smell and then on how he had to endure by himself before she came over

OG: でも味は濃い…普段は我慢してくれたんだ…
TL: "I'm supposed to do it like this, right?"
ED: she's commenting on the strong taste and then concludes that he's usually holding back his urges

014
OG: 我慢汁も…っ
TL: "I haven't seen him in a while after all..."
ED: she's gonna drink everything including his precum (directly related to prev bubble)

OG: 射精してっ
TL: "I can't take it!"
ED: this is her telling him to cum (in her head)

015
OG: もっと濃いのあがってきた...
TL: "Just a little more...♡"
ED: she's commenting on the thickness of the fluid

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Aww man, thanks for letting me know of more accurate translations. I actually just use Google Translate and DeepL and then try to interpret what the dialogue is from there so I definitely made a ton of mistakes. Sorry about that, and thanks again for pointing them out!

Oh and uh, should I... take down the gallery? I feel bad for accidentally putting out this rough of a translation now that I know there's actually a ton wrong with it so I uh... sorry everyone ;;

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>I actually just use Google Translate and DeepL and then try to interpret what the dialogue
So you're making shit up. Great. Also no, you can't remove a gallery just because it's a bad translation.

Here's actual advice: go learn Japanese.

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oh...I guess that's why your old translator notes were like blog posts instead of actual notes

but anyways nah you can't delete galleries on here anyway (by design)

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I would'nt have supposed one of the first Bocchi doujins I see translated would be so sweet !

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a tutorial on how to translate hentai: post a rough translation that is readable enough > wait for the elitists to start complaining > wait for the one retard that will go trough the whole thing and tell you dialogue by dialogue what to change> fix the translation

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Seriously, the least you could do is let people know ahead of time if you used a translator...

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i really hope this one is translated by another person, but sadly the chances are low considering this version is already out, ekakibit's works deserved more

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Damn it's rare to find a doujin that properly captures the feeling of the source material but this certainly did it. Although I wish there was some yuri, but that is personal preference.

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I seriously felt heavy depression, sex, and making progress happiness for nijika

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