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[Jikahatsudensho (flanvia)] Zange Ana | Confession Hole [English] [Kyuume] [Digital]

[自家発電処 (flanvia)] 懺悔穴 [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2023-01-06 15:41
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Language:English  TR
File Size:27.97 MiB
Length:45 pages
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Posted on 06 January 2023, 15:41 by:   Kyuume    PM
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Well, here it is, my first release of 2023.

But man am I slow compared to the Chinese and Koreans who released their TLs the next day.
Granted, I only started working on this post New Years.
Although, It didn't help that this was incredibly finicky to typeset properly on top of the numerous SFX either.

Also, I'm not sure why the raws are so low res but even if a high res version comes out down the line, it's highly unlikely that I'd be willing to redo everything here.

For anyone reading this, Flanvia is planning to release the sequel at C102.
I will absolutely be doing it when it does.

Author's Fanbox: https://flanvia.fanbox.cc/
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Support the author by buying the work here:
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Thanks to tos91041 for the raws: https://e-hentai.org/g/2417816/b4a521bbfb/

Also, if you have any requests or want to commission me
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Posted on 06 January 2023, 15:55 by:   DesuEx    PM
Score +412
Confess your sins, sad pandas.
Posted on 06 January 2023, 16:20 by:   Zugen_xD    PM
Score +262
When you vow to be a servant of god, but your body was made for sin.
Posted on 06 January 2023, 17:31 by:   dgjdgjdgj    PM
Score +61
forgive me daddy for i have sinned.
Posted on 06 January 2023, 18:04 by:   Valvagia    PM
Score +54
Ah it's the Patchouli guy. The art and theme (girl with a raging libido) did look familiar
Posted on 06 January 2023, 22:42 by:   cpasmoii    PM
Score +19
That's easily the best womb tatoo I've seen
Posted on 09 January 2023, 16:43 by:   Quflow    PM
Score +7
that first part:

and then they died. the e-- oh we're still going?
Posted on 10 January 2023, 06:13 by:   AndoTheCommando    PM
Score +6
been waiting for this one
Posted on 10 January 2023, 12:15 by:   pain_1    PM
Score +12
@Kyuume Thanks a lot for providing the translation! Im quite a fan of the Artist. Is there any chance you could translate the Daishotokan 4 as well? *hope* :D

https://e-hentai.org/g/2098861/3c97bdcf79/
Posted on 10 January 2023, 18:43 by:   Kyuume    PM
Score +37
@pain_1

It's not a 0% chance but I'm not really a Touhou fan so yeah... probably not very high, all things considered.
I also never want to put out something that doesn't live up to my own standards, and that one seems intense to say the least.
Posted on 11 January 2023, 09:41 by:   pain_1    PM
Score +12
@kyuume
I's a shame that it doesn't directly align with your taste. Nevertheless, I would still recommend giving the series a try. It's one of my favorites. ;D
Posted on 26 January 2023, 05:04 by:   Phacteria    PM
Score +12
Man,for some reason this felt more depressing than most mind break and even snuff stuff
Posted on 08 June 2023, 20:52 by:   Jeiben1    PM
Score +6
hell yeah, no better combination than glory hole and flanvia.
Posted on 20 January 2025, 04:25 by:   SANPH    PM
Score +6
@Kyuume

"small fry" is an ineffective translation and bumps native english speakers out of immersion. A fry is a type of fish that was commonly caught in old england. That english phrase is 350-400 years old depending on when it started being used as an insult, and is not used colloquially anymore (and hasn't been for decades - you might only hear it occasionally in a movie from the 1980s when a bully is terrorizing a smaller high school kid). Hell, Shakespeare himself compared some characters to small fish when he wanted to indicate their weakness, but he never used the fry fish AFAIK. This particular insult came about a bit later. So you can see how it jolts a skilled English reader out of their immersion.

The implication of the original japanese is "worthless," "weak," or "useless" - so use one of those instead.

I've seen "small fry" used by A LOT of JP->EN manga translators, so I'm guessing it's an issue with a particular kanji dictionary or other translation resource that is commonly used by manga translators, and whoever authors/makes the resource doesn't understand that "small fry" hasn't been a natural/effective English colloquialism in a very long time, but fails to offer effective alternatives.
Posted on 20 January 2025, 09:42 by:   Kyuume    PM
Score +12
@SANPH
You're somehow very lucky that I just so happened to be browsing through my uploads to even see this.

To be perfectly honest with you, I do agree with some of what you're saying, but your alternatives are honestly pretty lacking and also just as uninspired. There's nothing inherently wrong with "small fry" for ザコ in this situation, it's just kind of the textbook TL just like "It can't be helped" is for 仕方ない which is why you see it everywhere. In a translation that I would put out today, I'd definitely stray away from making the same choice I did here, and opt into something like "bitch hole" instead.

However, this is a decision I've made 2 years ago now (crazy how time flies). And in that time, I've improved leaps and bounds in every area imaginable (FWIW, I still don't count translation as my strongest skill). I treat my old uploads as time capsules to remind me how far I've come, given that they're supposed to represent the best of my ability at that very moment in time. Basically, you're kind of barking up the wrong tree at the wrong time because there's certainly no way that I would go back and implement such a change in the script.

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