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[Q Doujin] Bakunyuu Kaizoku no Yukemuri Ecchi (One Piece) [English]

[Q同人] 爆乳海賊の湯煙エッチ (ワンピース) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2023-01-06 18:45
Parent:2422509
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:31.13 MiB
Length:31 pages
Favorited:670 times
Rating:
130
Average: 3.83

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Posted on 06 January 2023, 18:45 by:   Fucker10007    PM
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Someone asked for the cover to be uploaded...so i did ^^
Posted on 06 January 2023, 03:28 by:   Red of EHCOVE    PM
Score +70
Ok, but you forgot to upload the cover...
Posted on 06 January 2023, 20:55 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +56
You used the wrong 1280x downsized resolution. Originals are at 2268 x 3154. Download the archive or download the non-downsized torrent (right side.)

Also, here's misc editing advice:

1. Punctuate. Periods and commas aren't optional.
2. When you clean out text, try NOT to remove the bubble lines. A lot of your bubbles have blurred out lines because you're careless.
3. Your text is often too big and spills out of the bubbles. Sometimes that's inevitable, but you need to use a white stroke when that happens.
Posted on 06 January 2023, 22:36 by:   Fucker10007    PM
Score +7
Thanks for the advice. To be honest i was a bit uncareful in this one especially. This one i did with the mentality of "Just get it done". I originally did not plan on sharing it anywhere. Only recently did i get into sharing some of my translation attempts. They are not meant to be the definitive version. If someone sees this and uses it to create a better quality version, i am all for it. Just some things never even see an amateur translation and that is kind of a shame. Like i said those were mostly done for my own benefit and now i am sharing some cuz, why not...
Posted on 07 January 2023, 05:16 by:   doujinhentai6006    PM
Score +2
@Fucker10007 Thanks for the translation and the upload. Your translation are on point, but the position of the dialogues are not visually appealing as they are not in the center of the dialogue bubble. Appreciate you work, please dk reply if you read this. Can you please translate this doujinshi by Iwao https://e-hentai.org/g/2304221/d875161ea3/ the previous translation to this doujinshi were stupid with a lot of mistakes, but with your translation I know it will be good.
Posted on 07 January 2023, 11:00 by:   Fucker10007    PM
Score +7
@doujinhentai6006 i see multiple translations of that here and at least 1 of them i think is acceptable. I only do this for fun if no other translation is available and i want to know the plot of the doujin/image. Since it has a translation i won't bother with it
Posted on 07 January 2023, 12:16 by:   doujinhentai6006    PM
Score +2
@Fucker10007 I was really looking forward to have you translate the above mentioned doujinshi by iwao, I'm not gonna force you. The reason I asked for your translation is because it is accurate. Anyways please try translating this doujinshi https://e-hentai.org/g/2427146/493c4c9e05/. All the best brother.

@Fucker10007 please ensure to follow the instructions given by @cutegyaru so that the upload looks amazing and you can get many likes.

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