Didn't see the point of redrawing the text boxes since they'd get covered anyway so I just completely whited them out. I tried cut down some dialogue that sounded too wordy and also messed with the colors a bit. Please let me know if you find a mistake.

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2110616/352461dd6a/

Edit: I worded my explanation poorly. I apologize. Yes, the Japanese text doesn't cover that much and if I had redrawn it, only a small portion of that would have been covered by horizontal text. That is lack of motivation on my part.

wow wow wow, I've been waiting for this to be translated for a long time. God bless you <3

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>Didn't see the point of redrawing the text boxes since they'd get covered anyway so I just completely whited them out.
Except we both know that's complete bullshit, and just one look at the raw clearly shows that the text boxes aren't even close to being fully covered by the text. The reason you whited them out is because you didn't want to bother redrawing (perhaps understandably so considering how much there is), even if it does hide a lot of background. Idk why you'd lie about something so easily verifiable.

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FINALLY! THE ELF HAREM THAT DOESN'T HAVE ORCS/SHOTAS/GOBLINS/HALF-ORCS IN IT!

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Thanks for the TL; Mama Saren is always great.
But yeah, like cutegyaru said, it was a bit weird that you explained why you whited the bubbles out with a pretty weird excuse. Honestly, you could've just said that you didn't feel like redrawing all the text bubbles since it's understandable, if we take into account not just the sheer number of redraws needed but also the texturing caused from the raws being a scan and not digital. Well, it's whatever.

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Kokkoro's formal dialogue while wacky things happen is always a + for me

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