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There are a few spots of strange line breaking.

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There is also a lot of poor english in there.

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You gonna do the rest?

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Onenightes : yeah, that happened because of the cleaning, I'm not really that good at it. you can see especially in the colored one, I tried to delete a whole speech bubble in that one. I also take the shortcut way to clean page 7, and I didn't see that error at the time I QC it.

Metonhi1 : Sorry for that, I'm not really good at English and never properly learn Japanese (I learn a bit from watching too much Anime/Drama, I can tell if subtitle are inaccurate or if they translate the latter part first but that's about it). I also want my translation to be as accurate (or literal) to the Japanese as possible, which is really hard because those languages are incompatible with each other (man, English is just more complicated than both Japanese and my native language).

dbgtt : yes, I started working on the sequel today. It probably takes me a week at most to finish it.

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part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2427289/b2574830de/
part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2429320/b1dbb504e2/ (you are here)
part 3: https://e-hentai.org/g/2456361/4dad8d153b/

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