Artist: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/45686504

Chapter 2 - Page 69 (Nice!)
Chapter 3 - Page 257
Chapter 4 - Page 466
Chapter 5 - Page 860

Highlight/put a dropshadow on your text and many of these pages are straight up unreadable(red text on red background for example).

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Hey dude, I'm Inquisidor77! Thank you for uploading the first five chapters from my serie, I really appreciate it and I'm glad that you like it! In about a week I will upload the sixth episode. And thank you so much, because I currently have very little time. According with the second chapter, I will do a remake in the future so that it can be read better.

Last edited on 17 January 2023, 23:59.

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@Inquisidor77 I suggest, you get someone to proofread your English releases..
there are many sentences, that would benefit of it.

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lol part 7 will need a new gallery, this thing got big XD

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Yeah! I prefer one gallery per chapter, it will be easier for everyone

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This looks very similar to DarkFlame

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IKR? It does look very similar to DarkFlame! Not the biggest fan of the huge boobs here though. But more concerning is that some of the body proportions seem a bit off.

Yeah, the English translation could certainly use some work. But the parts of the story are great! Thank you for your work!

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Thank you! You're right, the text needs a bit of improvement as I'm short on time and doing my best. And it is also true WarpedJ and Edagwa, Darkflame is one of my inspirations and one of my best artists to be able to make corruption stories and I admire him for their stories and the work he does behind them, plus I recommend his content because it is really good!

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