My first ever edidted doujin. this oneps with the chco idiol Sonoda Chiyoko from Idolm@ster Shiny Colors. Enjoy
A LITTLE WARNING: When I said my first ever edited doujin, I mean it! I grabbed this one to start learning how to use photoshot so it's bound to have more than a few editing mistakes. I took another look again and polished it some more before uploading it, but it still may carry many mistakes i did when editing for the first time. So I only ask for some mercy for past me who was just learning how to edit.

Can't say it's too bad of a first attempt.
However, do not typeset vertically like that.
Narrow bubbles do suck but the general accepted solution is to just add a stroke around the text if its too big for the bubble.
Also, you should level your images. Since it's a scan and not leveled, the pages will look washed out as you see here.
Here's a short guide on how to do it along with information about how you should export https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/902314557077336064/997654450149789757/optimize_image.jpg

Essentially, the black bits should be 100% black and the white parts should be 100% white.
Just play around with the slider and try to preserve as much detail as you can.

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