Adjusted MTL, solo job, pretty amateur, serviceable though.

just adding enough for rough TL but the errors continue to the end

003
OG: 娘と仲良くしてくれ、本当にありがとう
TL: "My daughter has talked about you often. Thank you for treating her well"
ED: she's asking Momoi to get along with Kotono

004
OG: えっと…本日はお日柄もよく…あの…っ
TL: "It's great to be able to meet you today!"
ED: she's tripping over herself and calling it something along the lines of an auspcious day

005
OG: お おもて…なし…？
TL: "Really? Even in front of her daughter...?"
ED: to reuse your/the machine's TL of the previous 2 lines, "treatment". even though "hospitality" is more accurate

006
OG: 桃井さんったらさきっぽに
TL: "Momoi-san, it looks like you're going to cum soon!"
ED: she's talking about Momoi's tip

008
OG: ら…らいじょうぶ…わしゅ♡
TL: "Thank you for the welcome..."
ED: she's saying that it's fine in response to the mother

011
OG: 桃井さんが頼んでもいないのにきもちよくしてくださいました♡
TL: "Mama, Momoi-san's tongue was amazing ♥. She made me feel so good! ♥"
ED: missing detail, she mentions Momoi did so without being asked

012
OG: え…あの…
TL: "Eh...that..."
ED: she's not pointing out anything, this is just like "um"

013
OG: 久しぶりの桃井さんのお味ですっ
TL: "Momoi-san's dick! ♥ It's finally in me! ♥ It tastes so good! ♥"
ED: missing detail, it's the first time in a while

014
OG: 膣壁にグリグリ擦りつけるのよ♡
TL: "Tighten your pussy's walls!"
ED: the mother's still directing tongue movements, telling Kotono press Momoi against her walls

016
OG: こんなに立派になったのね…
TL: "You've gotten so cute"
ED: this is just a comment on how she's she's grown

OG: 琴乃は大人になったのです
TL: "I might have grown up but..."
ED: this is a standalone sentence and she's just talking about how she's an adult now

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THIS IS WHAT WE WAnT!!! IDK WHY nO ARTIST EVER DRAw PUSsY WiTH TOnGUE> THAT ShIT IS LIKE THE HOTTEST FEtIsH EVer>

ALSO MY LAPToP KEYbOaRD IS bRoKEn> THE ShIFT KEY Is COnSTanTLY PRESS WItHOUT ME EVEn pRESsInG It> nEED HELP TO FIX>

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>MTL on his phone
>1280x downsized resolution
>shit typesetting
>shit font
>I TL because nobody did it!!
Bitch, this was fucking posted on 2022-12-11. That's right. It was posted ONE MONTH AGO. Holy fuck. You've basically ensured nobody's gonna give this a real translation now, unless it's out of spite.

God, people like you are a cancer of stupidity.

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phoneposters will always be cancer. if you're gonna do something, at least pretend to do it right retard.

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逼里面长舌头太涩了🤤

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This is so weird and so hot at the same time

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"as a result of adding my own personal touches, the translation may not be completely accurate"

The translation was already not accurate before that. This is machine translation we're talking about

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Tongue Pussy?

That's a new one!

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Interesting and hot as fuck

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well damn I guess I have another thing I'm into...

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after now Reading multiple different works where apparently a lot of people are complaining about something I didn't know what it was.

I have now discovered is basically people are complaining the person who translated uses AI or a machine or something or they don't do a perfect translation and to that?

I honestly say do it you f****** self then! like seriously?! what the f*** is wrong with you! like two Comics in a row from this one specific artist some guy is down there nitpicking the translation

"this is how it's translated" then f****** do it yourself! you f****** a******! you piece of little s***! get a f****** life!

either contribute and translate some works yourself and then you might earn the right to nitpick or shut your mouth forever

and finally who f****** cares! it's pornography, as a person who loves reading novels and erotic fiction I also appreciate something nice and easy to read, but I sure as hell has never complained if what I was reading was written very very badly or very badly translated because I don't f****** care! because I don't pay money for any of my pornography, so I don't have any right to complain.

and I think that goes for anyone if you don't pay for pornography or a project in general you don't get to complain.

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I wish we had more of this series

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