Finally done.

where chapter one?

Base +6, as102 -13, Worst Girl Homura -6, Addelheim -22

You can fine the first chapter here : https://e-hentai.org/g/2144656/34402d1cdf/

Base +7, Shellstrom +10, aimu23 +6, Daamin +6, Celibate_Wanker +14

You used the wrong 1280x downsized resolution. Originals are at 2150 x 3036. Download the archive or non-downsized torrent (right side.)

Base +22, LordZetta +14, Shurikensei +10, mellowjello +11, Addelheim +22, A.Kasuga +6, as102 +13, disposable.respect +6, blackpillow +8

For reference next time, you can just clone and update the gallery instead of making a whole new one.

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/Making_Galleries#Updating

P.S.- I have responded to your PM on the forum BTW.

Base +45, Addelheim +22, A.Kasuga +6

She tried to pierce him, but got pierced instead

Base +9, onlyregistere +14, raiden18 +8

read a few more pages and I'm not entirely sure this JP to CN to EN is gonna work out esp when the EN differs from the CN in places where it matches the JP raw

008
OG: なんで…
TL: "What..."
ED: why. this is correct in the Chinese TL as well (為什麼)

010
OG: アホエルフにも分かるように教育してやる
TL: "I must educate you so that you'll understand your position"
ED: missing detail, so that even idiot elves can understand. This is present in the Chinese TL (我要好好教育你讓你這個白痴精靈也能搞得憧情況)

OG: エルフは古来より大地から精霊のエネルギー（精気）を得る
TL: "Elves have the innate ability to absorb spiritual power"
ED: missing detail, from the earth. you can even see the arrows in the art. This is also in the Chinese TL (從大地中吸取精靈)

OG: 大地からの供給が途絶えたわけではない
TL: "But elves can still draw on large amounts of spiritual power"
ED: he's saying that didn't mean that their supply from the earth was cut off. The Chinese TL deviates from the raw here

OG: この淫紋契約ではその精気を / セックスを通し俺に供給するリンクを結ぶ
TL: "Using this lewd crest," / "I can steal the spiritual power in your body"
ED: huge missing detail, via sex. This is present in the Chinese TL (通過性交)

OG: お前は俺の魔力ドリンクバーということだ
TL: "That is, you're my magic power battery"
ED: he calls her a [beverage] refill station. The Chinese TL deviates from the raw here (補給站), but it isn't "battery"

OG: ドリンクバー
TL: "Battery?"
ED: same as above, refill station

OG: つまり
TL: "Anyways"
ED: in other words. it looks like he uses this a few times in the chapter and it kinda reinforces his idiot elf comment from earlier. This is also in Chinese TL (也就是說)

013
OG: 村…！
TL: "A town!"
ED: village...? This is also in the Chinese TL (村子)

OG: おいしいごはんも…！
TL: "And eat a piping hot meal...!"
ED: ...delicious? This is also in the Chinese TL (也能吃上香噴噴的飯了)

OG: もう2度と行けない…
TL: "Don't want to remember that..."
ED: she's saying she can't return there. The Chinese TL varies slightly, but it has nothing to do with remembrance

OG: マシなものを食いたいな…
TL: "I, too, want to eat something nice..."
ED: she wants to eat something better. This is in the Chinese TL as well (想吃更好的)

016
OG: 乳首コリコリするの…止まらない…♥
TL: "He's teasing my nipples...I can't stop myself anymore...♥"
ED: wrong pronoun

Base +23, Daruna +11, PinguPrin +7, dankestdungeon +23, disposable.respect +6, slapforce +6, cybeast93 +21, as102 +13, Genistar +6, Kcjpunk +7