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only read part of it but it seems like heavy MTL with some strange alterations
008 OG: 彼女たちは十色の友人であり戦友 / 強くも脆い十色を護る「守護者」 TL: "They are friends and sisters-in-arms of Toshiki" / "They are 「guardians」 who protect the strong but fragile Toshiki" ED: interesting how you/Google/DeepL decided to change her name here
OG: 護城百合 TL: "Goshiro Yuri" ED: Gojou
OG: 陽菜 TL: "Corona" ED: Akina/Hina/Haruna...
008 OG: しっかりしてくださいよ〜 TL: "Senpai~ Please pull yourself together~" ED: where'd the "senpai" come from?
009 OG: 補充させてください♥ TL: "Senpai please refill it for me ♥" ED: where'd the "senpai" come from?
OG: 私は…あとでいい TL: "I'll...see you later" ED: she's answering Akina/Hina/Haruna's question saying she'll be fine until later, not saying that she'll see her later
019 OG: 町に現れる前に仕留められて良かった〜 TL: "Well, I'm glad sempai took out that demon before it got to the town" ED: where'd the "sempai" come from?
020 OG: せっかく集めた魔力も台無し… TL: "All that magic power I've gathered is lost" ED: missing detail, this is in addition to the tentacles
021 OG: 余計な小細工をされる前に速攻で… TL: "I'll finish her quickly, before she adapts..." ED: before she pulls any cheap tricks
OG: 教えてくれるのね!あなた意外とやさし / い TL: "You told me! Toiro-chan is actually very amiable" ED: where'd the honorific come from?
022 OG: Hで TL: "A pervert" ED: this is supposed to be an adjective
OG: 卑怯な TL: "A coward..." ED: this is also supposed to be an adjective. and she means sneaky/dirty not cowardly
OG: 魔の者なんだから TL: "Do forgive me, I am a Demon after all" ED: she doesn't ask for forgiveness
023 OG: まず…いっ TL: "Firstly..." ED: she's realizing how much trouble she's in, not saying "firstly"
OG: どれだけ強くてもココは鍛えられない TL: "No matter how strong Toiro-chan is, you can't resist this place" ED: she's saying it can't be exercised/trained. also where'd the honorific come from?
OG: とことん開発してあげる♥ TL: "I'll develop Toiro-chan to the fullest ♥" ED: exploit (this is all directly related to the prev bubble). also where'd the honorific come from?
024 OG: クリトリスの感度を上げた後は~… TL: "After I do something magical to your clitoris~" ED: she's making it more sensitive
030 OG: はな…してっ!! TL: "It's..." / "sucking on it...!" ED: she wants to be released
OG: はげし… TL: "Cumming!!!" ED: she's talking about the intensity