A sequel comic to Rise of the Demon Queen that I commissioned from Astraea-R on DeviantArt. More pages will be added as they're created. Visuals made by Astraea-R with the story written by me.

artist's page: https://www.deviantart.com/astraea-r

Check out the original story here: https://e-hentai.org/g/2344697/20985991e3/

Please feel free to leave comments and let us know what you think of the story, or even offer some suggestions.

Ooh, a sequel, awesome! But... Lilith must be stopped now? Awww, don't do that... I want her to become more bigger and stronger. We were all rooting for her in the first part...
Okay the queen says she's been terrorizing them but she just wants to make sure people wouldn't rise against demons again, which is understandable after what happened to her.

Also, why does Stacy not like reading manga, if she's such a slut she's gonna have a field day with anime/manga porn.

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@giovannileanza Iskra has a reason she wants to 'stop' Lilith and that will be revealed very soon. And Stacy doesn't necessarily hate manga, she just joined the club because she needed some extra curricular activities, and she wanted to do something that was easy.

Last edited on 19 December 2022, 06:25.

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Oh shoot, i didn't realise you're the creator of this comic *didn't read your first comment until now, derp*. So you wrote part 1 as well and i had no idea all that time, that's so cool!
As i mentioned i loved the first part and am excited to see what you have in store for us! ^__^

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@giovannileanza Technically I'm not the creator of the comic, I just commissioned it. While I might write the dialogue and provide the story details, Astraea-R creates the all scenes in Koikatsu. And I'm glad you liked the first part :)

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Oh, a sequel to the demon queen comic? An unexpected surprise, but a welcome one. Can't wait to see what you have planned this time. If it has as much of the content as the first one, I'm sure I'll definitely like this one too.

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@otherscar I just want to temper your expectations now, this sequel won't be nearly as long as the original. It will still be a decent length, but it definitely won't reach 90+ pages like the original.

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A nice start, here's to hoping we get to see more pregnancy in future pages!

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So will Lilith get bigger later?

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Well guess this probably means the 4 new girls are gonna kill her new children guess rhe cycle of hatred will continue. Also that Elf queen is pretty sus. Hope to see many giant girls of different sizes.

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@flamebrandi What? The 4 new heroes definitely aren’t going to be killing Lilith’s children. I don’t know where you’d get that idea from.

@RALSAS More than likely not, but if she does, it won’t be anything massive.

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@JTZ429 - Of course, credits to Astraea as well for doing most of the work i assume, you're a winning team in my book!
While i don't like Koikatsu that much i should mail Astraea sometime for Stacy's character card, she looks hot :P

I dunno what it is with Koikatsu, the anime CG looks... alright i guess, but i just can't seem to make a good looking girl in that game.
I prefer Illusion's realistic looking games, i enjoyed Honey Select 2 quite a lot and currently playing their latest game, RoomGirl.

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@JTZ429，I really hope to see the scene where the four heroes and the Queen of Elves fight against Lilith. But I personally prefer the tragic ending. They may still fail to defeat Lilith and be swallowed up, although it seems that this is not a bad ending?

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@JTZ429, Well that just means we'll see how this story plays out faster this time, eh? Besides, I'm in it for the scenes. Especially if there's gonna be more same sized f/f vore.

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I know I have no say since I’m enjoying this for free, but I would honestly prefer an ending where Lilith becomes powerful to rule over the universe and becomes a true goddess. Exerting her divine will on reality.
Hentai/porn involving a deity is pretty scarce. Doubly so for “bad end/evil deity” porn.

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@Eric Keldrev If you like that type of story, and you haven't read it already, I suggest you check out my previous commission from Astraea, Lucy's Vore n Growth Spell.

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Ah, so she wants to steal Lilith's power
Well, can't wait to see how she'll divinely fuck this plan up

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R.I.P. Cute maid girl, never forget :(

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Oh, damn! It's such a plot again. I was almost cheated. Ithaca cheated the four heroes only for his own immortality. I hope he will be punished as he deserves. Lilith will let them pay the price

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There she is, so good to see Lilith again, i actually felt happy when i saw her ＼(＾O＾)／ She's looking better than ever!

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@giovannileanza I know, it's great to have Lilith back. I asked Astraea to tweak her design a bit and he did an excellent job, she's looking fine as hell.

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Absolutely, i noticed the little tweaks and it's great, well done :D I also really really like Aisling ♥ Definitely my favorite character, after Lilith of course :3
Edit: Nice, a little story from Rozanne what happened after part 1 (lovely children btw, happy mom there), also nice to see how life is these days, pretty peaceful indeed. That's another thing i love about this part so far ^^

Last edited on 08 January 2023, 01:44.

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@giovannileanza Yeah, we were originally planning to address the whole mind control thing at the end of Part 1 coming up soon, but I felt that it fit better here with Rozanne explaining what happened. I wanted to show that in this part, Lilith has changed quite a bit since the original and isn't the vengeful person she used to be. She wants to use her powers to better the world and make it a safe place for her children. I also had a ton of fun writing Rozanne as a loving mama who's close to her kids, I thought that fit her character really well.

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I'm actually interested as to where this is going.

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I'm quite surprised Lilith mellowed out after getting her revenge. Godhood must've given her an epiphany or something...or more likely she mellowed out due to her target being taken care of(aka the kingdom that stumbled into the fate of making a demon queen). Not much reason to continue revenge when your target is taken care of.

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@Azathoth777888999 Well, it has been 15 years since the original story took place, so I'd hope Lilith's thirst for vengeance would have mellowed out by now lol. Plus, she has children now, so she just wants to keep them safe and make the world a better place for them.

@ultrakojima Glad you're enjoying the story :)

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some of these characters such as Jupiter, Sasha, Layla and Elen were absorbed during part 1, why are they still around on part 2? did Lilith released them or something?

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@i will own you No, Lilith technically didn’t release them, she still has all the power she absorbed from them. But she did bring back to life all the heroes she devoured and made them her wives.

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Will the bodies, hair styles and main attire of the isekaied girls be different after Lilith pleasures them or by the end of this comic? Thanks. :3

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@NessieNep By the end of this sex scene? Definitely not. By the end of the story? Possibly. I'll have to discuss it with Astraea.

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@JTZ429
I at least hope that we'll get to see them pregnant!

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@Stephen9001 Same tbh lol.

Also wouldn't mind them getting bigger tits, ass and hips as well as outfits that are a sort of blend between a slave/harem outfit and a venus bikini made with jewels (as seen in the Dead or Alive franchise) but that's just me lol.

Its ultimately up to you since its your comic @JTZ429 :3

Edit: Another idea I have is for Lilith to change the names of the heroines to more fantasy-like names as well as her changing their species somehow (e.g. Penelope becomes an elf, Stacy gets turned into a succubus, etc.).

Again, all up to you @JTZ429

Last edited on 18 January 2023, 20:06.

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@Stephen9001 Of course our new heroes will get pregnant :)

@NessieNep I spoke to Astraea about new outfits and hairstyles for the new heroes, but I left the decision up to him, I don't particularly care either way. As for bigger tits, asses, and changing their names and species, I doubt we'll go that far, but I won't entirely rule it out.

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@JTZ429 Good to know~! :3

"this sequel won't be nearly as long as the original. It will still be a decent length, but it definitely won't reach 90+ pages like the original."

Its looking like that might age poorly unless this comic wraps up soon lol. :3

Last edited on 19 January 2023, 21:37.

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@NessieNep The main story will be wrapping up soon. But there will be an epilogue just like the original story.

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@JTZ429 Also good to know~! Can't wait~!:D

Edit: Looking forward to whatever Astraea ends up doing with that epilogue. :3

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@NessieNep The epilogue should be very fun, Astraea and I have something unique planned.

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@JTZ429 Unique, huh? Interesting... :3

Edit: Seriously that got my mind racing lol.

Last edited on 20 January 2023, 00:11.

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Nothing really interesting happens, just fucking like rabbits. The first one was waaaay better imo

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@vwolf198 That's what I like about it tbh (plus its not finished yet sooo....).

EDIT: Speaking of, I noticed that this batch of pages is taking a tad longer than the others have had to come out. Is there a reason for this? Thanks. :3

Last edited on 28 January 2023, 01:37.

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@NessieNep Astraea has other projects he has to work on

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@JTZ429 Fair.

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Pretty underwhelming story this time, I was hoping the villain had planned for the girls to switch sides but it seems to be a pretty dull conclusion. Hopefully the demon queen at least has a decent meal.

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oh that elf is in so much trouble, i can see her being eaten, use as a cock sock(in her original form), being truninto breeding stock, or the queen could take away her powers and give her to the kids as a sex toy

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I want to see Lilith knocked up, just so we can see her with a nice big belly for reasons other than vore. Really get some mileage out of that pattern on her belly!

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I honestly hope the villain has an ace up her sleeve. Surely she had a plan B incase the heroes used common sense. Would have been nice to see the villain go through the same ascension and growth like Lilith before the heroes stop her.

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@vwolf198 Sorry, but that’s not happening. This is Lilith’s story, not Iskra’s. And how would the heroes even stop Iskra if she drained Lilith’s powers? The heroes stood NO chance of defeating Lilith, so if Iskra took Lilith’s power, the heroes couldn’t beat her. Plus, Astraea and I don’t want to drag the main story out another 40+ pages.

@Stephen9001 Sorry, but that’s not going to happen either. Who would you even get Lilith pregnant lmao? She’d likely have to impregnate herself. No, Lilith is the one who does the impregnating :)

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@JTZ429 I dunno, she could use her ludicrous amount of power to give one of her wives/lovers a dick? Perhaps she decides she wants to try out carrying a baby herself, after all, the others seem to enjoy it!

But alright, I get it, fair enough.

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@JTZ429 I just figured Iskra would be a bit more prepared than that. My expectations was that Iskra would have been close by in disguise or something to see the battle fold and make sure it goes to her favor, and if not then would use some sorta of plot device she might have had in one of the girls to trigger something that would weaken Lillith giving her the opportunity to drain her. Then after she has her fun with those powers, the heroes stop her using similar plot device. Then Lillith has her way with everyone.

I could go more into details, but the point is that there could be a way around what you're saying, but it is your story and I respect that. That said, overall it is a rather underwhelming story with not much meat besides Lillith having sex. Would have been nice to actually see her use more powers and all to really drive home the point that she is all powerful and such.

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@vwolf198 Have Iskra close by in disguise? First, how would she infiltrate Lilith's castle to observe the battle? Second, her being close enough to observe the battle puts her in direct danger of being caught or possibly hit in the crossfire. Third, if Iskra had some magical mcguffin plot device that let her defeat Lilith so easily, there would have been no point in her summoning heroes from a different world. She could have simply used this mcguffin plot device as soon as the original story ended, or in the 15 years since the original story. Iskra's plan was for these new heroes to weaken Lilith long enough for her to drain her powers. Fourth, your entire last point literally makes zero sense. So, apparently, Iskra has enough forward thinking to have some random mcguffin plot device to defeat Lilith in case the heroes can't, but then she didn't think of a way so she couldn't be defeated by the EXACT SAME plot device? AND on top of this, she also apparently doesn't immediately eliminate the new heroes and Liltih, leaving them alive so that they can retaliate against her? Where is the logic there? I'm sorry, but that's just ridiculous. You say there are ways around what I'm saying, but I easily can poke massive holes in everything you've said so far, so we could do this back-and-forth dance all day.

The story is only underwhelming to you. Pretty much everyone else seems to be enjoying it so far. The ENTIRE point of this sequel has been to show what Lilith has been up to since the original story, and that includes her growing family and rebuilding the demon race (which is literally what she said was her next main goal at the end of the first part.) We saw PLENTY of Lilith showcasing her powers and strength in the original story, so we don't need more of that. If that's all you want to see, go back and re-read the first part.

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@JTZ429 Are we really going to talk about logic? Ok sure. If she is all powerful... you know, the whole "ALPHA AND OMEGA", you think Lilith would have just known about her scheme with her all powerful self and settle it, saving you 80+ pages, I guess she isn't really all that powerful then according to your interpretation of it, which really wouldn't be so far-fetched to have a "magical mcguffin plot device" at that point, hmm?

You are absolutely correct that we can do this dance all day if we are bringing logic into your story, but I'm not going to go into details on what could have happened or try to explain your story in a different light, I thought of that on the top of my head and it wasn't meant to take serious. I should have stated that my expectation to the story overall just have a more cunning villain. Again its your story so if you feel like you can't do anything about it then your "logic" trumps mine. I gave you my criticism, I don't really like it, the story is underwhelming, and it's not just me. Sorry if you don't agree to that and everyone else loves it. That's great for them. They are inclined to have their opinions such as I.

It's not awful, but it's not great. It's underwhelming

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@vwolf198 ??????? Wtf are you even talking about? Lilith literally did handle the situation with Iskra herself. All she did was have the heroes contact her and trick her. Other than that, Lilith took Iskra out with no problem by herself.

Once again, the primary focus of this entire sequel is Lilith and her family, and what she’s been up to since the first part. Iskra was NEVER meant to be some cunning, threatening ultimate villain. Her only purpose was to be bring in the new heroes and to bring some conflict into the story. That’s it, nothing more.

Go read another story if this one is so ‘underwhelming.’ I’m sick of seeing your petty, nitpicky complaints because it’s blatantly obvious that all you wanted to see was another power fantasy story.

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@JTZ429 "GRRRR YOU MAKE CRITICISM SO I HATE YOU NOW GRRRRR"

Grow up. I know what you're saying, but I still didn't like it. I thought it would be something different and it wasn't, get over yourself. I'm not upset that it isn't what I want but I still wanted to voice my opinion which you can't seem to accept. It's not me being petty, or nitpicky. I'm not picking a tiny thing about it and deem it awful because of that. The whole story is underwhelming dude, and I want you to know that, stop trying to fight me and just accept that you can't make everyone happy.

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@vwolf198 “GRRRR YOU DIDN’T MAKE THE EXACT STORY I WANTED SO I HATE YOU NOW GRRRRR"

Grow up and go read something else

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@JTZ429 I don't hate you, I don't even know you. Your story just didn't resonate with me?

Also I'm not even upset. You're the one blowing up on me?

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@vwolf198 Then stop reading and go somewhere else. How many times do I have to repeat myself? Most people tend to move on from stories that don’t ‘resonate’ with them. Yet you’re still sticking around for some strange reason.

Also, I’m not ‘blowing up’ at you in the slightest.

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@JTZ429 Yeah but most people don't have an angry little kid screaming at them because they didn't like their content. Try being a bit more mature. I'll be the big one and take my leave.

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@vwolf198 Angry? Who’s angry here? Because it sure isn’t me. If anyone is upset and immature here it’s you because you’re projecting it all on me.

So goodbye, and I hope to never see you again

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Geez~! What the hell happened here? Lol.

All I want is isekai harem mind control sex stuff. If I wanted some grand epic I'd read Homer's "The Odyssey" or something.

Edit: Not directed at you @JTZ429. You do you~! :3

Last edited on 09 February 2023, 22:04.

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@NessieNep I know you weren't talking about me :)

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This was just 80+ pages of vanilla futa porn with a story... I mean, i guess normies will like it... Who commisions a rare gts growth vore absorbtion guy to do literal normie stuff? god damnit dude lmao

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@magno It's literally a sequel to the story focused entirely on GTS growth, vore, and absorption, and is supposed to show Lilith growing her family and rebuilding the demon race (which she explicitly said she'd do at the end of the first part.) If all you want is vore, growth, and absorption, then go re-read the original story or, better yet, you're more than welcome to commission your own story :)

This is the third story that I've commissioned from Astraea, and the first two centered entirely around vore, absorption, and growth. So, heaven forbid I wanted to do something different the third time. I'll tell you the same thing I told vwolf198, if you don't like it, then please don't read it.

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@JTZ429 Astraea doesn't accept commissions rn last time I checked btw.

And yeah, I guess that's why I liked this better than the original. Not a vore person tbh. This gal (me) is definitely a sucker for mind control harem crap though~! :3

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lol I kind of saw where vwolf was coming from.

I myself sort of have similar disappointments with this since I like “bad ending/corruption” porn (especially ones based around futa) and I don’t think we get enough of that. So I was a little sad when this went the wholesome route for the sequel. I personally would have liked more evilness for the sequel. But it’s not a big deal lmao. Also I’m not putting down money for anything so my complaints don’t really hold any real weight.

Also the whole “story being underwhelming” or whatever doesn’t really make sense. It’s fucking fetish porn. I kind of feel like the story comes second to it being fap material.

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@Eric Keldrev At least you're being reasonable and honest, not a total prick like vwolf lmao

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@JTZ429 You was the one who started being argumentative and hostile to me. I just gave an opinion and you didn't like it. I was merely defending myself. My opinion still stands.
@Eric Keldrev The story was underwhelming in a sense that there wasn't much going on with the plot besides vanilla futa scenes. It is as you say that it went through a more wholesome route with it and honestly I couldn't care less about how peaceful it's been with lillith and how she is repopulating or w.e.

I was disappointed how it concluded, without much "meat" it had compared to the first one. But again, that's just my opinion.

The new pages added are not bad

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@vwolf198 I thought you were 'taking your leave' lmao, you can leave again now.

The first story had zero 'meat' either because it was quite literally just Lilith going from place to place eating people, that's all that happened. So, of course, you thought the recent pages weren't bad because all you care about seeing is vore and absorption.

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@JTZ429 I came back to see the update but scrolling back down I see you have this weird obsession with me. Can't seem to shake me off your head or something like I struck a nerve or something hmmm.

Also I'm not projecting anything.
Your tone, mannerism and overall attitude during our exchange screams you was angry and honestly just makes you even more immature, especially when you're talking crap behind my back.

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@vwolf198 Bye bye, you're free to leave

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@JTZ429 You sure you don't want me to stay? I'm right here now so go ahead and talk more about me.

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@vwolf198 Adiós, eres libre de irte

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@JTZ429 What is your problem with me? Seriously. A comment above mine said your story was underwhelming, yet I'm the one you want to attack. Why are you being such a prick?

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@vwolf198 Думал, ты был "большим человеком". Вы можете уйти сейчас

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@vwolf198 if you’re looking for well developed and meaningful stories you are on the wrong fucking site dude. This is a torrent site for fetish porn. There’s little-no high art on this website.

Complaint about the fact that the story is underwhelming or that the characters make no sense or anything like that is like complaining there’s no flavor complexity in a Big Mac at McDonald's.

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@JTZ429 Lmao how old are you dude?

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@Eric Keldrev Fucking exactly! Someone actually gets it!

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@Eric Keldrev You got it completely wrong dude.

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@vwolf198 ドアの外で自分を見てください。

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@Eric Keldrev Wait I thought you saw what I was coming from and you actually nailed it, the "story" wasn't what I was disappointed about, but just the overall plot.

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@JTZ429 I will admit I think the better move here would be to be the bigger man here. I understand his comments probably upset you but slinging mud back doesn’t accomplish anything.

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@vwolf198 You're seriously complaining about the fucking plot in fetish porn, what the hell is wrong with you?

@Eric Keldrev Nah, vwolf is apparently the 'bigger man' so he's free to leave whenever, and I've got nothing better to do right now.

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@Eric Keldrev Are you being daft on purpose? I'm talking about the fact that there isn't much going on compared the the first one. You said it yourself you was disappointed because it didn't have x. That's exactly my reason too, only I call it a plot. But apparently it's not called that? This porn is not what I had hoped for? Is that better? What are we talking about here?

Your interpretation of "story" or "plot" seems completely separated from the porn we are talking about here, like they can't intertwine to you or something?

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@vwolf198 'This porn is not what I had hoped for' Then say this from the very start jackass. Something isn't underwhelming or apparently doesn't have 'meat' just because you had hoped something else would happen instead. Literally, all you had to say was 'I wish x happened' or 'I was hoping to see more of y' That's literally all you had to say and this stupid fucking argument never would have happened. Choose your words more carefully next time.

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@JTZ429 It's still fucking underwhelming you fucking idiot. Nothing has changed only your dumb ass finally figured it out.

I did say x didn't happened but you decided to be an argumentative prick.

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@vwolf198 Figured out what? That you're a fucking moron who doesn't know how to speak the English language and properly convey his thoughts?

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@JTZ429 I told you that I expected the villain to at least be more cunning but you dropped a stupid paragraph arguing the fact that it wasn't going to happen and asked how could it.

YOU are the one who asked me questions and I gave you something on the top of my head. Then you started going on a fucking piss fit about how it wouldn't work.

Scroll up, YOU are the one who engaged.

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@vwolf198 'I told you that I expected the villain to at least be more cunning' For like the third fucking time, you're reading fetish porn on a goddamn torrent website. If you want expertly-written villains and a densely-packed story, go somewhere else. Because the fact that you're even complaining about that type of shit in the first place for a porn story is fucking ridiculous. Especially for a story that I personally commissioned and am paying for.

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@JTZ429 And now you're finally coming to me and saying "well why didn't you say porn dummy" It's E motha fucking Hentai! Why do I need to say that!? We all know why we are here! Why do I need to add the porn to this??

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@vwolf198 Because your autistic ass is legitimately complaining about the fucking plot and characters in a porn story as if they actually matter at all in the first place. Like do you watch regular porn and critique the story and character's motivations before they fuck? NO! You just jackoff and move on.

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@JTZ429 Again I don't care about the story, you said it yourself I just wanted the thing from the first one and it didn't happen. I thought the villain would do more. I didn't like how it concluded, that's it. I'm not looking at the story. I'm not reading this like is rich literature. I voiced my opinion and your stupid ass didn't like it. That's why we are here fighting. Over a stupid opinion.

@JTZ429 I would have moved on long ago but apparently this angry little kid just loves to keep fighting with me. You started this, you are the one who engaged me.

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@vwolf198 You have literally said MULTIPLE times that you didn't like the story's plot. Do you not know that story and plot are essentially the same word and can be used fairly interchangeably?

'you said it yourself I just wanted the thing from the first one and it didn't happen' Once again, then say this in the first place dumbass.

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@JTZ429 I wasn't even "complaining" I just voiced my opinion and here you are lol. That's all it was... an opinion. And you decided to fight with me.

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@vwolf198 If you had simply voiced your opinion correctly in the first place, this entire asinine fight never would have started.

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@JTZ429 What exactly was wrong with what I said? I wanted the villain to do more and you didn't want that. Again you was the one who engaged. Does it matter how I should have said it? Why did you even try to fight with me? What did I say that made you type all that?

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@vwolf198 'Does it matter how I should have said it?' Is this even a question? Of course, it matters. Words and how you present your thoughts are extremely important.

'I wish the villain had done more.' or 'I was hoping to see this happen instead.' That's all you needed to say and is what you should have said. All that BS about how the story is underwhelming, or that nothing is happening was 100% unnecessary.

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@JTZ429 Ahhhhh ok I see why you acted the way you did.

I still think the story was underwhelming with how the villain was treated, I expected her to bring some more trouble, bring that porn, bring the stuff from the first one over. That's why I said the story was underwhelming dude. Why did it take this long for you to finally realize that? And all because I should have stated "porn" instead of "plot" or "story". I'm in a porn site. I know what I'm here for. It doesn't need to be said.

I'm being genuine when I say, please don't take it personally but it's just how I see this....storypornplot. Your other ones are great and I'm probably gonna read them again in a bit.

That said imma apologize to you for all of this...weird shit that's been going on. It honestly shouldn't have escalated like this. I'm ready to move this pass this, because arguing at a porn site is the least thing anyone wants to do lol.

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Can't wait to see what the isekaied harem looks like at the end and/or at the epilogue~! :3

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@vwolf198 Okay, I accept your apology and I apologize as well, you presented your opinion much better this time.

'Why did it take this long for you to finally realize that?' Dude c'mon, you were doing so well. Why did you have to try and slip this stupid little jab in? It took me so long to realize because YOU didn't properly convey your opinion initially.

@NessieNep The epilogue is going to be very fun ;)

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@JTZ429 Welp here goes round 2 lol. Jk

I honestly didn't think you'd react this way. It's just a big ol misunderstanding then on both sides.

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@JTZ429 HYYYPE~! Omg I bet the girls will look super sexy after living as Lilith's concubines (or wives perhaps?) for a long while~!

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@JTZ429 I wonder how long this series will end

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I’m glad that this argument ended with a mutual understand but that read was a trip and a half lmao.

Also rereading vwolf’s original comments I think one of the points he was trying to make was that it would have been nice to see more of the goddess Lilith flexing her deity powers. Some people find that hot.

Tbh that’s another thing I don’t think we get enough of is hentai with deities. Them using their deity powers to make us worship them is hot. :3

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@Eric Keldrev I understand that, but that was the entire point of the first comic, it was literally nothing but Lilith flexing her powers and dominating people. That’s all my Lucy comic was as well. I didn’t want to to the SAME exact thing for a third time.

@RALSAS The main story is essentially completed, there’s only a few pages left. Other than that, there’s just the epilogue and I don’t know how long that will end up being.

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@Eric Keldrev Yeah that would have been nice to see. Loved that power trip she was going through. But its fair that they wanted to go in a different direction this time around.

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@JTZ429 Reading through all @vwolf198 comments did he really needed to be so specific about his reason not liking it? He expected the villain to do more and she really didn't, therefore the story or plot or porn, whatever you want to call this.. which was more on the vanilla side was underwhelming to him compared to the first one he mentioned above. That's really all you needed to know and grasp. How much clarity did you really need? He didn't like it. You should have just told him to go read something else instead of pushing on about the subject because reading all that was asinine on both sides lol. It honestly should have stopped when he started talking about his expectations.

As far as this story goes, I'm not really a fan of the futa fucking, but it was nice to see some vore at the end and I hope to see more of that :)

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@XeroElemen1 I rather we not go through this again, it's over now so let's just move away from it.

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@XeroElemen1 Dude, we JUST resolved things, please just leave it alone and stop talking about it.

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@JTZ429 How soon are we going to get the epilogue pages? Same amount of time on average as the rest of it? :3

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@NessieNep I can't really say, it all depends on when Astraea can work on them

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@JTZ429 Fair.

OMG~! Mind controlled Iskra~! :D

I hope Iskra gets a cute, skimpy harem outfit in the epilogue~! Likewise I hope Lilith changes the bodies of the other girls the same way she did with Iskra~! Teehee~!

Last edited on 14 February 2023, 23:37.

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Hmm, reviving Iskra and giving her a body like that, there simply is no end to Lilith's generosity.
Even it is to use her as a slave.. like an actual slave this time, unlike the rest of her harem who are free of such magic.

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In the Immortal words of the Dagoth Ur:
"Omnipotent. Omniscient. Sovereign. Immutable. How sweet it is to be a god!”

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Epilogue hype~!

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@NessieNep We should be starting the epilogue after the next batch of pages

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@JTZ429 Yeeeeeeeeee~!

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With this, the main story is now completed. The next batch of pages will be starting the epilogue.

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Ooooooooooooooooo~! Will this epilogue continue where the last page here left off or will there be another time skip? :3

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@NessieNep There will be a timeskip

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@JTZ429 Oh my~! I wonder how long~! Super interested in seeing how the the newly inducted members of the harem will look~! Hope they have cute skimpy new outfits and hairstyles at least~! :3

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I hope the girls will get their cum bath after all and I am also intriged by Lilith gaining the life drain skill.
Otherwise Lilith getting some R&R with kids would be nice seeing some of the mixed genes.
The overall story is fantastic (including part 1). I haven't checked any other series as frequent as this in years.
Last one I was that hyped about was probably the Magic Muscle Comic

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I love this series even though I don't like futanari. It's really a shame that Yuri is so rarely paired with Isekai and Harem.

Will we see Lilith and her newly-expanded harem in part three?

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@Ifrit_of_Ice I won't completely rule out a part three in the future, but as of right now Astraea and I don't have any plans for one.

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I'm wondering where a part three would even go...

"Gift of the Demon Queen" perhaps...?

Edit: Mind is racing for that epilogue~! HYYYPE~!

Last edited on 22 February 2023, 22:47.

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I was hoping that the epilogue would show us a pregnant Iskra and the heroines.

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Oh my~! Epilogue is looking promising~! Also looking like that it might be a lot longer than the previous epilogue by a wide margin. :3

Edit: Charlotte already looks cute all decked out in her harem garb (the new twin tail braids are a nice touch too)~! Can't wait to see the other three~!

Just noticed her hips and butt got bigger~! :D

Edit 3: Did Lilith modify her body over those ten years or did Charlotte and the others develop that way over that span of time? Either way makes sense. :3

Last edited on 24 February 2023, 20:07.

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@NessieNep No, Lilith didn't modify their bodies, they simply developed that way naturally over time

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@JTZ429 Good to know~! Again, can't wait to see the other three~!

Edit: Another question. If they were to ask for it and/or if Lilith hasn't done it already, would she grant the new members of her harem (or any member of her harem really) eternal youth or immortality/demigoddess status (or at least grant them a much longer lifespan more akin to how long the average person from her world would live)?

Last edited on 24 February 2023, 21:54.

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Is that a crossover with the Lucy comic we're seeing? Wonder how that's gonna go out.

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@lixiana - Indeed, i don't doubt Lilith's might for one sec but Lucy is so much further than that even (loved that comic too btw).
Lilith may be the alpha and omega level infinite eternal demon goddess now, but i'm still kinda nervous, hehe. Although.. she did obtain Iskra's vitality drain power, that might prove to be a valuable asset.
And let's not forget her current height isn't even her true size, she's keeping herself at that level for convenience. In any case, we'll just have to wait and see.. I'm sure it'll work out for everyone.

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@giovannileazna This is just my over optimistic take on what i hope will happen. Since Lilith also got a taset of godhood, but eventually became more mature and didnt just go on a consuming spree, I'd love her to (after a confrotation with Lucy) somehow convice her to stop her rampage and to recreate her original universe and people she consumed in a similar fashion Lilith did. It sounds a little too good, but a man can dream.

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OMG they all look cute with their new harem outfits~!

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@lixiana - Seeing those latest pages it's about to get down now, here's hoping your outcome will prove to be true.

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...Am I the only one that's rooting for Lucy to devour deities and grow endlessly hungrier and more powerful?

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Do not, please dont fucking do it... god damnit dude.

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Please don't let Lucy win. That would be the worst ending for this story.

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Well this has gotten silly now hasn't it.

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@Stephen9001 Nothing wrong with that :)

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Would wanna make Lucy part of Liliths Harem, her demonification remaining, either as an equal to Lilith, Lucy breaking her cycle for new pleasure or as a new dog for lilith. Both fusing into a perfect being, so neither rwally looses would also be nice.

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Man, that last panel on the last page with supermassive lilith and lucy with the planet between them would make a great wallpaper :P

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You know, I first came to the comments section to offer my voice unto the void about how this just doesn't appeal to my particular tastes, despite having many tags I'd otherwise enjoy and followed it closely since its prequel started, how Lilith went from cute to a bloated monster too large to properly penetrate anything, and how the whole story is permeated by this theme of excess, but... then I saw that pretty much every comment by the uploader and commissioner has been downvoted to hell, and I find that fact infinitely more humorous than anything I could have possibly lent to the discussion.

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Where did that ring come from again?

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@flamebrandi Lilith's mother gave it to her before she died way back at the beginning of part 1

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Why, why ruin lucy dude, holy shit. i will do an alt ending dude that you better know.

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@magno Ruin Lucy? Lmao okay, whatever dude

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I'm really curious to see how it's gonna turn out. Lilith's gotta be omega powerful now, will she bring back lucy to life and add her to her harem as well? Cant wait for the next update

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Still holding on to the faint hope that Lucy will get her revenge.

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Oh crap~! Yeah what will Lilith do with her new found power? I hope she gives it to her harem somehow.

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Is there going to be any more pages showing what happens after? Hope we get to see Lilith fully absorb Lucy.

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With these last few pages, Lilith's story is officially concluded! I hope most of you enjoyed it, even if you only liked certain parts. As of right now, Astraea and I don't have any plans for a part 3, so this will likely be the last time we see Lilith. But, I'd love to work with Astraea again on another story sometime in the future.

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Tbh while I enjoyed Liliths arc I wasn't the biggest fan of Lucy in her own comic so this is my ideal ending especially since she isn't a mindless slave like Iskra I'm definitely looking forward to your next work.

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Can she only revive those she absorbed? Otherwise, couldn't she just revive her fallen people?

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@Loki the Flameshield Yes, she can only revive people she’s absorbed

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Woa, a thousand years, pretty big timeskip. Makes you wonder what happened during that time.
I guess the world's still the same as it was when the girls arrived there and nothing else happened.
Well i guess chapter two is done now and everyone's happy, grats.

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Great finale! Sad to say goodbye gor Lilith, but all good things must come to an end

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Yeeeeeee~! That additional 1000 year time skip pretty much solidifies that this harem is made up of demigoddesses lol~!

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@NessieNep Demigoddess? Hmmm, I don't think I'd say that. Lilith has just been sharing her powers over vitality with her harem, basically giving them all eternal life.

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@JTZ429 Good to know. :3

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Kinda wondering though how come Iskra and Lucy are treated so differently cuz they both threatened to do really bad stuff heck what Lucy did was far worse?

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@flamebrandi Lilith felt personally betrayed by Iskra because she was the one who allowed Iskra to stay in power as ruler of the elves. Iskra also tried to manipulate Penelope, Charlotte, Stacy, and Kelly into helping her betray Lilith. Iskra has also potentially killed hundreds or even thousands of people across her long lifespan in order to retain her youth. While Lucy is more like a force of nature that Lilith just met, and has no prior connection to, so she deals out a lesser punishment.

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莉莉丝在众多圈内主角中的正常程度，就如同磁场癫佬中的明月圣王一般

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Good or semi good demon stories are a bit of a rarity and I like how wholesome this is. A nice change of pace.

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