Thanks for reading <3
Source of this ZhongTao doujin: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/96136399

it doesn't look like the random twitter fanart at the end of the gallery is part of the original

002
OG: なのになぜここまで心がざわめく…
TL: "My heart is heavy...why did it have to come to this?"
ED: "So why does my heart still stir this much?" (directly related to prev 2 lines)

003
OG: そっかー…
TL: "It's true...
ED: "I see ..."

OG: だが一つだけ助かる方法はある．．．
TL: "There is one way which can help, just that..."
ED: missing detail, there is ONLY one way to save her life

OG: ハハッ…鍾離さんも真面目な顔してすごいこというねぇ
TL: "Hehe...your face looks dead serious, Mr. Zhongli that's a nice thing to say"
ED: she's saying that he has such a serious face while saying such astonishing things (not "that's a nice thing to say")

OG: うん…ここで死ぬのも運命として私は受け入れるつもりだよっ
TL: "Yes...if it's my fate to die here, then I acquiesce"
ED: there's really no "if", she just accepts that dying is her fate

005
OG: っいやっ…
TL: "Ooh..."
ED: this is light refusal

OG: ―こんな顔ができたのか…
TL: "such a face could you..."
ED: "I didn't know you could make that kind of expression..."

006
OG: まぁまぁそれより…はいっ
TL: "Oh my, oh my. Other than that...yeah"
ED: "Now, now, more importantly...here [you go]"

007
OG: 婚姻もしてない処女に手を出したんだから
TL: "We weren't even married. You got your hands on a virgin. The amount which we have done it"
ED: "You laid your hands on an unmarried virgin girl."

OG: ーまったくこの子は… / やはり… / 苦手だ…
TL: "Geez, this brat..." / "After all..." / "I'm weak to this"
ED: "Good grief, it looks like I'm weak to this girl after all..."

Base +23, Daddyfatsack +6

@rsx205 thank you very much, if I have time I would fix the dialogues based on your translations

Base +5, Akrioz +6