MTL
The novel section is not included due to extra MTL-ness... but I can upload it if requested

You should have not uploaded this one either

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It's ok for keep it to yourself but should stop publish MTL.
Her surname is Kamishiro not Jindai, it has Furikana(text above Kanji) in novel version

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I would appreciate u posting the novel version, hope the hate for mtl doesnt stop u

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002
OG: 父さんが弁護士をしている事はさくらも知ってるだろう？
TL: "You know that my father was a lawyer, right?"
ED: he's not talking about his father, he's talking about himself lol

OG: しかし法に関わる者に賄賂を贈ったり逆に脅迫をする輩は今も昔もいる
TL: "But there are and always have been those who bribe and intimidate those in law enforcement"
ED: it's just anyone having to do with the law, not "law enforcement"

003
OG: そしてそんな家族の団欒がずっと続くのだろうと私は思っていた
TL: "And gradually, I thought that these family gatherings would last forever"
ED: she's drawing a conclusion from the prev line not saying "gradually", and "family gatherings" should be family harmony

OG: なんだ？お前たちは？
TL: "What? What are you doing?"
ED: he's asking who they are lol

005
OG: 徳山組組長徳山轟！！
TL: "Tokuyama group head Tokuyama Todoroki"
ED: his given name is Gou. it's even spelled out in the raws

OG: アンタの旦那の主導した「魔薬撲滅運動」では大損させられたわい
TL: "I lost a lot of money in your husband's campaign to eliminate magic drugs"
ED: narcotics lol "magic drugs"

007
OG: う…ううう…
TL: "Uh...uhhh..."
ED: she's crying

011
OG: 商売女でも滅多にないエロいまんこじゃ
TL: "Even businesswomen rarely have such an erotic cunt"
ED: I mean I guess prostitutes are "businesswomen"

016
OG: うん信頼のシン信用のシン
TL: "Yeah, trust thin trust shin"
ED: she's explaining how she came up with the name

019
OG: や そこはぁ！？
TL: "And there it is!?"
ED: she's reacting to him about to fuck her ass

020
OG: らってこれはさくらの為らからぁ
TL: "Come on, it's for Sakura's sake"
ED: she doesn't say "come on"

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