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Page 2:
avoid you → prevent you (I think this fits better)
betreying → betraying

Base +11, Coledas Ukgent +9, ominea +6, lilinxad +3, Pavale +6, Aleafysuki#7515 +6, bobthebaco +6

Page 5:
Cristal -> Crystal
Wast -> Waste

Page 8:
Why you look -> Why do you look (I think this makes a bit more sense)

Page 9:
Grils -> Girls
This can get addicted -> This can get addicting (I think this fits better)

Page 10:
Her stocking feels not bad -> Her stockings don't feel bad (I think this makes a bit more sense)

Page 15:
Scince -> Since
Demon was -> Demons were (unless Demon was the name of someone)
Sacrifise -> Sacrifice

Base +8, ominea +6, lilinxad +3, Pavale +6, Yesha. +1, Aleafysuki#7515 +6, bobthebaco +6, mar-bcrle +6

this story ended too early makes me unsatisfied

Base +6, ominea +6, sexyhotasian +10, Sydorovich +6, Cadavrus +6, Drevlik +6, bobthebaco +6

不算短，节奏把握的很好。

Base +6, ominea +6

at least put her soul into an onahole

Base +8, Kômei +14, bobthebaco +6, jacquismt +6

A very interesting plot, where a heroine who has fighting for the kingdom gets betrasyed by the king of that country, that possesses her body and uses it to become the new queen impreganted by his old body. But I wish the story was longer.

Base +29