https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/100872183

Base +25, Beddhist +17, Jonapher +6, kelpea -6

001
OG: しばらく旅人に会えずご無沙汰でエネルギー減少しまくりの心海
TL: "It's been a while since I've seen the traveler and I've lost my energy due to that"
ED: this isn't narrated in first person

OG: そんな時に部下であるゴローに押し倒されてしまった
TL: "While thinking that, I was pushed down by General Gorou"
ED: "that's when", not "while thinking that". also missing detail, Gorou is her subordinate

OG: 心海様が最近元気が無いようですから
TL: "Your excellency seems down since the traveler left so..."
ED: he just says "lately" and nothing about the traveler

OG: ソコに手を入れないで！
TL: "Don't touch me there!"
ED: she's specifically saying not to stick his hand inside

002
OG: 心海様…今日のコトは写真機で撮ってますので
TL: "Your excellency, I'm taking a photo of you with a kamera"
ED: he's taking a picture of the aftermath...with a camera

OG: どうやら脅されているようですが…これは従わなければいけませんね…
TL: "It looks like I'll have to obey Gorou to keep our secert[sic] but that might not be so bad..."
ED: she's saying she's being threatened so she has to obey him

OG: ナカイキさせられたエネルギー3回復
TL: N/A
ED: she recovered energy 3 times from cumming from her pussy

OG: 手マンでイかされたエネルギー1回復
TL: N/A
ED: she recovered energy 1 time from being fingered to orgasm

OG: ナカダシされたエネルギー5回復
TL: N/A
ED: she recovered energy 5 times from getting creampied

003
OG: えっ…昨日ヤったばかりなのに…
TL: "Huh? But yesterday..."
ED: he's talking about how they just fucked yesterday

OG: 昨日のはあなたが私を脅したのでしょう
TL: "Yesterday, you raped me to get your way"
ED: she's only talking about getting threatened

OG: こ、心海さままさか…！？
TL: "Your excellency..."
ED: missing his expression of disbelief

you're just goin ham with fuckin up this poor artist's fanbox content huh lol

Base +24, Kudamaki +13, Orion9137 +11, cybeast93 +21, observer1980 +21, Jonapher -6, Runs_On_whole_grain -3, Evyy +20, death blades +12, Nomake Wan +19, minnazzo +15

五郎的反击

Base +2, Runs_On_whole_grain -3