Why post MTL content here where no one will appreciate it and no one wants it? Just take it straight to another site and go enjoy their community instead, please.
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Its pretty important when translating a story like this that you get the gender of whats being said correct. As it is now, I can't figure out whats going on in pages 3 & 4 which is the most exciting part of the story. I think what's suppose to be happening is the dark haired girl wants to have sex/borrow the guy, and the maid says no, but I'm not at all sure. I also think the maid brags to the dark haired girl that she's got a cage on the butler, and the dark haired girl wants to check it out, but again I just don't know and your text has done little to clear up the situation.