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>offering commissions
>TL mistakes everywhere

Really? You got hit with a rough TL tag like... 2 weeks ago and you decided "yup, I'm ready to CHARGE PEOPLE MONEY NOW" Know what that's called? Scamming.

Also, are you using the KR version?? LMAO

rough translation (just a sample. I didn't even read the gigantic foreword)

Page 8
Your TL: Massaging it a bit
JP: 少し剥く
Intent: 剥く = to peel. She's peeling her foreskin.

Page 8
Your TL: My penis feels so hot!
JP: いたぁ
Intent: it hurts

Page 9
Your TL: Your mouth feels delicious!
JP: 気持ちいい
Intent: Please tell me you didn't get this wrong. Your mouth feels good.

Page 10
Your TL: nil
JP: 私にも・・・してほしい・・・
Intent: Omitted text that you cleaned.

Page 11
Your TL: I can't remember when was the last time I saw a cock.
JP: あの人のも久しぶりというのに
Intent: She's not talking about seeing any random cock. She's specifically referencing her husband. "It's been so long since I've seen his (my husband's) dick..."

Page 12
Your TL: it's a bit small for my liking
JP: こんなに小さいのに凄く脈うって・・・
Intent: Idk why you're creating fetishes here. She's never implying they're "too small for her liking" All she's saying is that DESPITE being small, they're pulsing/throbbing super hard

Page 12
Your TL: But I can feel it throbbing so much even though I'm just sucking it // I'm so horny right now... my body feels hot...
JP: 咥えてるだけなのに・・・ // 体が火照ってくる
Intent: Actually, THESE two lines are connected. You somehow connected the "small dick" part with the "in my mouth" part, when in reality it's: "Even though all I'm doing is sucking their cocks... // My body's heating up." The idea is that she's so sex-starved just sucking cock makes her super horny.

Page 15
Your TL: The things I do for you two...
JP: だめッしっかりしないと
Intent: She's saying she has to hold herself together/rein in her lust.

Page 15
Your TL: What the hell are you doing to my body!?
JP: 何・・・いったい何をしようと・・・
Intent: Where does "to my body" come from? She's just asking them what the hell they're doing/planning to do in general.

Page 17
Your TL: Maho! Agh... what are you doing?! // Don't lick down there
JP: まほっなんでそんな事ッ // ほら・・・ぁ汚いから・・・あ駄目・・・んはぁ
Intent: Ok, you confused "what" and "why", which is concerning. You've also omitted the main point of the sentence: she's concerned about how dirty she is. This is a common trope to establish characters as prudes. "Maho! Why are you doing this?! // C'mon... I'm dirty down there! No! Don't...!"

Beyond the quality of your translation, your text is waaaaaay too big.

edit: typo

Last edited on 05 March 2023, 23:35.

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Unless they were cooperatively growing a penis like a potted plant, even the title is grammatically incorrect.

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