Hi,I'm Quan
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RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/2480311/307d32252a/
Korean (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2488466/e7341a70af/
Spanish (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2483450/b68672a075/
Chinese (Translation):https://e-hentai.org/g/2489705/2391b0cc9f/

awkward phrasing aside, I was gonna say I assumed you looked at the Chinese TL for help in certain areas, but it turns out you did the Chinese TL too and made the same mistakes

003
OG: ラブラブな私たちの仲を裂こうとしてる失恋の悪魔なんだ！
TL: "This 'Lost Love Devil' is trying to destroy our lovely-dovey relationship!!!"
ED: "lost love" is heartbreak, also "lovey dovey"

OG: もお〜〜せっかく私たち同棲はじめたのにこんな子どももついてくるなんて聞いてないよ
TL: "Oh my God, we've just moved in together. And this girl I've never heard of is following us?"
ED: she's saying that she and Denji just started shacking up but she didn't know a kid like Nayuta would be tagging along

OG: デンジ君もこの子にかまってばっかりだから全然そういう雰囲気になれないし…
TL: "Denji-kun sticks with her every time, so how can we both get into that kind of vibe..."
ED: Denji-kun's always looking after that girl

OG: 気を取り直して今日はデート！
TL: "But today is our date day!"
ED: missing detail, she tells herself that she needs to recollect herself

005
OG: あはい
TL: "Ah?"
ED: this is him saying "oh ok" because he's giving in to her quick refusal

OG: デンジ君って包茎だったんだね
TL: "Is Denji-kun phimosis?"
ED: I think this error speaks for itself

OG: だーもーこれだから見せたくなかったのにぃ！
TL: "Ahhhh! That's why I don't want you to see it!!!"
ED: wrong tense

OG: そうだよワリーかよ！
TL: "Yes!! The answer is yes!! damn it!"
ED: he apologizes sarcastically (you got this in the Chinese TL but not here)

006
OG: ううん
TL: "emmhmm..."
ED: this is her telling him not to apologize e.g. "nuh uh" (directly related to previous and next bubble)

OG: 短小・包茎・早漏ってまじか…
TL: "Short, phimosis, and this early serious...?"
ED: "Short, phimotic, and premature. Are you serious...?"

007
OG: しょうがないなキミは～
TL: "Now it's the time..."
ED: she's saying he's helpless

OG: キミも隅には置けませんな～
TL: "Now it's your turn"
ED: you made up the dialogue

008
OG: コラ！まだ出しちゃダメ～～！
TL: "Hey! Come on"
ED: she explicitly warns him not to cum again

009
OG: オギャ… / オギャ…
TL: "Aha..." / "Aha..."
ED: this is him crying like a baby

Last edited on 11 March 2023, 19:47.

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no offense Quan, but get a proofreader.

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Another new scanlator bullied into disowning their gallery. What a sad day for e-hentai. At least they didn't disown their Chinese gallery.

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Yes, I'm Quan
I want to apologize about this translation.
Seems like this is a very bad translation
Reason that I want to translate it to English cuz I saw a person on ***** waiting the english TL so I want to translate it for people like this even though English are not my main language.
I translate english TL and chinese TL using translate tool and use the few of translated version for an reference,I did mention this is a rough translation on chinese TL but I realized I didn't mention this on english TL and I didn't know Ehentai got a "rough translation" tag,I should add this too,Sorry for it.
I disowned this gallery and probably make a new translate based on user rsx205 comment.Thanks for the correction.
Sorry for all I did,Thanks

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i might redo this lol

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