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[DarkFlame] Alice Miyamoto - That Time I Became a Succubus - Part 11 - Alice's Mistake

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Posted:2023-03-17 21:36
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Posted on 17 March 2023, 21:36 by:   Konata-chan    PM
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You have waited five months, YES!! Five months for this chapter of TTIBAS, and I must say, thank you for your constant support and patience! I always try my best to make it worth the wait!

Now, on the previous chapter of TTIBAS, Alice lost her most beloved Yuuki to Claire, the only succubus rival that Alice has. She managed to corrupt Yuuki in the most treacherous of ways, by using Annie, Mae's friend, to bait Yuuki into her dreams in order to ambush her and put a slave collar on her! Yuuki had no chance to resist Claire's corruption, and eventually became Claire's girlfriend, and with that, all memories of her being with Alice were sealed away deep inside of her mind.

On this chapter of TTIBAS, Alice has not given up on Yuuki yet, she is stubborn and she is sure she will get her back by any means necessary. And her first step is to visit Monica at Tighter Better, to help her make a plan to get Yuuki back. But what Alice doesn't know is that Claire is one step ahead, and is waiting for Alice to do something desperate and make a mistake. That's when Claire will try to also corrupt Alice to eliminate her from the competition. Will Alice succeed? Or will she end up being corrupted by Claire? We'll see on this newest chapter of TTIBAS!!

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Posted on 17 March 2023, 23:13 by:   Optitron    PM
Score +50
Alice's mask is now my favorite accessory from any DarkFlame work that I've read. Desperately hoping to see it again, even if its only in a side-story or a what-if.

Also, that's where Claire is planning on leaving things until Alice gives in on her own? I'd say someone should tell her that pride comes before a fall, but considering all the terrible, nasty, delicious things I want to see done to her for all the terrible, nasty, delicious things she's done to my favorite characters in this series, I'll just hope she gets an opportunity to learn through experience.
Posted on 18 March 2023, 02:59 by:   user6131    PM
Score +10
I am 1000% in agreement with Optitron about Claire.

I think getting like 90-100% of a chapter of Claire having all her power stripped and suffering endless torment from being right on the edge of cumming but never getting to climax while watching Alice and Yuuki reunite would be immensely nice to see after every god awful thing she's put Yuuki and Alice through.

Honestly the Yuuki/Alice relationship had/will have again hopefully a very unique corruption yuri/vanilla yuri romance vibe that is very rare, and an amazing thing to see when well executed like it was in chapter 5.

It's the best part of TTIBAS, at least in my opinion, and I hope that we will get to see it again in the main story.
Posted on 18 March 2023, 08:06 by:   Aki kizuna    PM
Score +28
I honestly agree with everyone that Claire needs to get her s*** clapped but we all know dark flame stories that a lot of the time they either end with the main character falling to corruption or the villain winning in the end.... I mean I really do want our girls to come out on top rather than being the bottoms but at the same time I know what I got myself into and I'm just expecting that ending where Claire wins in the end....its up to darkflame really... maybe they'll surprise me and give me something unexpected at least I hope that's what's going to happen but whatever.

Now going into a bit of a analytical side on there I still say Alice is the stronger out of the two between her and Claire she's definitely stronger because it took more for her to turn into a succubus more power and more treatments while Claire's was quick and she's just reveling in power scratch that reveling in the little bit of power she gained from becoming a succubus while Alice still hasn't really tapped into her full potential so please let that be the case because I just want to see where Alice absorbs her suit and makes it a part of her power and just dominates Claire. XD
Posted on 18 March 2023, 14:48 by:   CF7758758    PM
Score +5
终于更新了,呜呜呜呜,一直开新坑,终于把代表作更了

两派吵得似乎有点多,个人觉得爱丽是更有感情的女王。真正让加入她的姐妹们都非常快乐也从不强制控制她们。克莱尔则是一个雷厉风行的铁腕女王,一切都是一个强制控制,一切都是随她心意,一切已自己为中心。s女王和怀柔女同之间的战斗,鹿死谁手还不一定呢。要么就是爱丽丝感动拿下克莱尔,要么就是爱丽丝全员沦为克莱尔的女奴
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Posted on 18 March 2023, 22:28 by:   Optitron    PM
Score +22
@Aki kizuna While I agree that there is absolutely a chance that TTIBAS will end with Alice becoming a morally ambiguous 'Mistress of the Dream Succubi' (I do not claim ownership of this designation and would happily allow for its use if DarkFlame happens to see this post and not find the title as ridiculous as I thought it was when I came up with it) or another dream succubus' sex slave or just about anything in between, I think the important question in this instance is what role Claire is meant to play in the larger story. While its possible that she's meant to be the final boss of the series, I personally can't see her as much more than a sub-boss, especially after her performance in this chapter. For one thing, she has way too many glaring weaknesses to be a final boss. In addition to being arrogant and over-confident, she loses her temper far too easily when things aren't going her way, and she overlooks threats that she sees as beneath her, like Alice's friends/minions. All these are easily exploitable, especially now that Alice knows who her enemy is. Furthermore, Claire's story feels way too one-note to be that of a final boss. We've seen her origin in chapter 7, and the person it showed us is basically an entitled brat who had one more thing fall into her lap which she eagerly embraced in pursuit of her own selfish needs. While her sadism and depravity are fearsome to behold, I feel like someone capable of taking Alice down or at least putting up a fight worthy of the story's climax is likely to have a more compelling backstory than the one we received for her current foe. Finally, while Claire's defeat would move the story forward, I feel like unless something new is revealed, her defeat wouldn't resolve what seems like the most important unanswered question in the series, which is who chose to set Alice down the path of becoming a succubus and why. It feels like Claire could simply be the first in a line of succubus foes that Alice will have to overcome in order to learn the answers to those questions and gain the strength to live out her life as the person / dream succubus she wants to be... or maybe I'm overthinking things and after a few more chapters Alice will become Claire's exclusive sex pet and she'll never be allowed to look at or even think about Yuuki ever again and that'll be the end of TTIBAS and I'll sneak back here and quietly delete this post in shame. I'd feel sad about that, because it would mean the respect I've built up for DarkFlame as a storyteller was misplaced, but that doesn't mean it's impossible.
Posted on 19 March 2023, 20:20 by:   user6131    PM
Score +6
@Optitron As Much as I agree about Claire not feeling like the final boss, as well as hope that the story goes in the direction of the end of chapter page seems to imply that it will go (Alice getting the upper hand and making Claire pay), the corruption of both Alice and Mae has me very very worried Alice's plan's gonna fail.

I really really really really hope I'm wrong, But my gut tells me Mae's corruption is gonna do something down the line. It was brought up here for a reason, and i can easily see it allowing Claire to counter whatever Alice has planned.

Again I really hope that's not the case, but I can't help but feel it's gonna be that (Claire uses the new corruption of Mae or Alice or both to come out on top, Which I think would just be an awful way to go and ruin my enjoyment for TTIBAS as a whole), or maybe Claire's counter to Alice's plan would cause enough fury and hatred in Alice to unlock some kind of power boost/New power/ new transformation that will allow Alice to put an end to/depower+enslave Claire and come out on top with Yuuki by her side, which will put an end to the Arc with Claire but could set up the next arc possibly with Alice maybe going down a darker path with this new power/corruption, which would be much more preferable to Claire winning out, But I feel like I could see it going either way. or maybe some other unexpected outcome.

I just hope Claire doesn't win out in the end, But given just how much enjoyment I and clearly others have gotten from Yuuki+Alice's relationship, i still have some hope they will win out and get back together in the end.
Posted on 19 March 2023, 23:20 by:   Optitron    PM
Score +14
@user6131 So I could be mistaken, but I think there's a clue in this chapter as to what Alice has in mind for dealing with Claire. I don't want to state it straight out since others might want to find it on their own, but I will say that there was a similar hint in the last chapter that made what happened when Alice tried to enter Yuuki's dream pretty unsurprising (though fortunately no less enjoyable). If I'm right, then Alice's plan should be very effective due to the weaknesses I mentioned previously. At that point it should become a battle of attrition to see who breaks first between Alice and Claire, and in this regard I realize I left out one more of Claire's weaknesses, which is that she gives in to pleasure far more quickly and easily than most of the other characters in TTIBAS. The only reason this hasn't been a serious problem for her up to this point is that she's always made sure she has the upper hand with an opponent before she starts using them to satisfy her own sexual needs. It seems to me that if Alice can attain even a slight edge over Claire, then the difference in their ability to reign in their sexual urges will determine the outcome of the battle. This would also be quite fitting, since it would prove that Alice's decision to resist the Dream Succubus when she was transformed was the correct one, as it prepared her for a win over Claire.
Mae's corruption is a bit of a wild card. My gut tells me that she is an unintended victim of Claire's precautions and that there was no greater goal in corrupting Mae than protecting her property (Annie). The most concerning part of this to me is that we weren't shown what happened in Annie's dream. If this was just Mae activating the booby trap left behind in Claire's largely forgotten and discarded minion, then its just the cost of getting the information Team Alice needed for the fight. On the other hand, if Claire took an active role in Mae's corruption, then there could be something more sinister at work here. Personally, I stand by my assertion that Claire only has eyes for the primary targets of her plans, which are currently Alice and Yuuki, and that she is incapable of viewing any other parties involved as more than a nuisance to be swatted away when necessary but otherwise ignored. Still, unless / until we're shown exactly what happened in Annie's dream, we can only speculate as to the significance of Mae's corruption, which means how / when / if DarkFlame chooses to present this will be of great importance. If this scene isn't shown until after Alice's plan is enacted, then it will likely mean very bad things are in store for both Alice and Mae. We'll just have to wait and see how things play out in the next chapter.
Posted on 22 March 2023, 00:20 by:   user6131    PM
Score +6
@Optitron After reading your comment and rereading the last few chapters, I have some new thoughts

- I agree that Claire's just not worthy of being the final boss that she is just too one-note to end up winning out. I don't think I'm the only one who feels that she's getting in the way of what we came for and has outstayed her welcome.

- based on how claire corrupted Yuuki in ch 10, and Alice's declaration at the end of this chapter, I Think I know what you were hinting about what Alice has planned. and If she's at the very least on a similar succubus power level to claire, she should be able to pull it off.

- while I agree with Mae's wildcard status, I think whoever she is revealed to be loyal to is gonna be who wins, unless Alice gets some new power/transformation from Mae revealing to be loyal to Claire. And though I feel that Claire thwarting Alice's plans for a 3rd time, or possibly even 4th if you count ch 10, and winning would be the wrong choice for the story, it's not an impossibility.

- I really really hope we're reaching the end of everything with Claire, and not be at like the halfway point. Chapter 5 is what attracted me to Darkflame's work to begin with. then Claire came along, tore that great dynamic apart and took TTIBAS in a direction i have less than zero interest in.
Now what's keeping me invested is seeing Claire's potential downfall, Alice saving Yuuki, and the hope TTIBAS heads back to a vibe that chapters 5,6, and most of 8 had.
Posted on 23 March 2023, 15:36 by:   Elnormeme    PM
Score +9
相信作者最后会让yuki回到alice身边的。。。不喜欢被ntr啊!
Posted on 03 April 2023, 21:51 by:   Dragoon 2502    PM
Score +7
Creo que solo queda esperar para saber que pasará en el siguiente capítulo de TTIBAS porque si se dieron cuenta es que no sabemos si Maya también terminó como Mae o será la clave para derrotar a Claire y recuperar a Yukki pero por lo que vi en este capítulo me da entender que si Alice y Mae no pueden con la Corrupción de Claire será una pérdida total para Alice o tal vez Alice tenga un plan pero ese Plan podría ser Súper Arriesgado porque pienso que Alice y Mae se dejarían derrotar por Claire pero Alice le avisaría a Maya para que use su poder para salvar a Alice,Mae y posiblemente a Yukki pero como dije hay que esperar y le doy un 10 a DarkFlame por su trabajo e historia
Posted on 19 May 2023, 10:06 by:   kuuki268501    PM
Score +6
到底谁才是主角,好好恶堕后宫硬整成NTR

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