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that one hell of a ugly bastard we got here

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Pls go back to DomiShota, Mitsudoue.

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sigh boring af,

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Look at that handsome bloke. No wonder she eventually fell for him.

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need more ntr mitsudoue and make these pdf files cry

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LOL

I admit, it easier to suspend your belief when the NTR guy is a chad.

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Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/2441723/00c2d8b7de/
Chinese (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2447843/b1c8e809fe/
Korean (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2441471/99b87377f8/

Base +40, Not Benedict +6, PervyYoungman +7

that interaction on p.27-28 is completely mistranslated

辛辣 doesn't mean spicy, it means harsh/bitter [words in this context].
調子に乗る means to get carried away, not "how does it feel"
臭い means to stink, which you omitted

p.27 "Don't get too close to me... // your breath stinks."

*Dude gets mad, see face on p.28*

p.28 "That was extremely rude." // "Did getting popular get to your head?"

Also, you forgot to put periods.

edit: toning down language after having talked to the TL

Last edited on 21 March 2023, 03:15.

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Well shit he has better works out there so I guess he really needed a quick buck this time

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looks like this auhtor is a one horse ride. nothing new here at all.

too bad as he had some talent but he needed a better editor to tell him to cool off a bit. in the end it is just abuseive trash.

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