@zordon666 He has potential. Don't ruin it.

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Potential? Sure. But considering that their art hasn’t improved much in more than half a decade perhaps that’s stretching it.
They have their figures consistent now and a good understanding of anatomy, but there’s no understanding of lighting and shading still and you can tell they haven’t ever challenged themself to go further.

Want my honest recommendation? Take some art classes, learn the full basics down to contouring and shading, and start doing studies instead of *just* horny sketches. When you’ve developed an artist’s eye and expanded your box of tricks, it’s not even comparable what kind of things you can do.

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I think the art is good the story was a little bit rushed but still good. Please make story simillar like this or make re make this story but longer. This story was really good. Keep up the good work.

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Despite the strange beginning, the story ended well for both of them in their second life.
Nice comic

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I'm not seeing how this is yandere.

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Fuck Yeah Foxtide888 brings the Sexy stuff again I'm glad he made this a bit rushed but if you look at the ending credits he did this in one day so cut foxtide888 a break and chill.

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Damn, I'm impressed that you wrote this in one sitting with sparkling water and vitamins!

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this feels like the author read a bunch of ntr, absoutly hated it, and made this as... revenge or something?

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