PART 1:
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/2367701/3d6a8ece80/
English: https://e-hentai.org/g/2371173/7628c93d27/
Chinese 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2371213/863087203f/
Chinese 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2507331/4b4a4e4cb3/
Korean: https://e-hentai.org/g/2369409/99e33881ea/
Spanish: https://e-hentai.org/g/2390292/d7d67b3004/
Portuguese: https://e-hentai.org/g/2444051/eb36231a9a/

PART 2:
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/2503437/c9fc3e0600/
English <- YOU'RE HERE
Chinese: https://e-hentai.org/g/2505936/531ca762d0/
Korean: https://e-hentai.org/g/2496359/52410638dd/

Contact and commissions:
Mail: blavatskyproject@gmail.com
PayPal: @lemuriaintheseas

Thanks a lot to Kingleader for this commission!

If someone finds a textless version of the cover, I'll edit and update it asap.

EDIT: Sorry for updating it twice in a row. I'm a mess.

page 12.

God bless.

Also you can guess what's coming next from the artists tweet about Summer Comiket.

https://twitter.com/megumi_yakiniku/status/1631624371642191873/photo/1

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OG: 昨日のＷ杯のキーパー凄かったなー
TL: "That goalie from last world cup's match was great..."
ED: yesterday's world cup match?

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he uses a lot of horse racing/gambling terminology here
idk if you intentionally changed them but since the guy seems to be into sports it might be worth keeping:

OG: 本命
TL: "Most likely case"
ED: the betting favorite

OG: 対抗
TL: "worst case scenario"
ED: the contender/rival/outsider

OG: 大穴
TL: "delusional development"
ED: the long shot/dark horse

OG: 大穴きちゃぁ？？
TL: "We're getting delusional here??"
ED: same as earlier, the long shot/dark horse is making a run since he thought he was about to die but she took him to a love hotel instead

e: also "gropped"

Last edited on 31 March 2023, 19:59.

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@rsx205

Oh, I didn't know that was an specific terminology. There wasn't anything like that in the prequel, so I changed it to something everyone would understand. It's better to keep that aspect of his personality, though, so I'll revert that.

Page 5 is changed because it sounded better. Yesterday match is probably the last one he saw, so the meaning remains the same.

Thank you very much~

PS: I'm sorry but I don't get what you mean by that last line. (Edit: Oh, I see)

Last edited on 31 March 2023, 20:07.

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Here's a good way to make your title less awkward:

The Reason Why I Was Able to Get a Black Gyaru Girlfriend

How I Got Myself a Tanned/Black Gyaru GF

(by the way, if you ever find yourself on gyaru, feel free to hit me up. i can't do everything everywhere all the time, but I can help clean up scripts and QC.)

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@cutegyaru

I know the title sounds weird, but I preferred to keep it similar to part one's for coherence reasons. Also, re-editing page 3, with everything I left unfinished because the title covered it, would be a mess I prefer not getting into.

PS: I appreciate the offer, but I'm a lone wolf. All corrections are welcomed, but I prefer working alone.

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I actually prefer gayru's title suggestion, but I don't think yours is bad. Either way, good translation!

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17: in this matters => in this matter / in these matters

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I just wanna say. This is like the holy grail of doujinshi for me. It was more than "just porn." Its fabulous!

It is almost as good as that one. With the girl living on the streets and gets taken in by some guy. But dude is very resistant to accepting her sexual favors at first. And by then end they fall deeply in love.

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next should be 3p.

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