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[Tenchuumaru] Hitozuma Tokiko no Tenraku (Complete)

[天誅丸] 人妻時子の転落

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Posted:2023-04-06 21:29
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:Japanese  
File Size:138.9 MiB
Length:234 pages
Favorited:495 times
Rating:
105
Average: 4.38

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Posted on 06 April 2023, 21:29 by:   kenahamtan    PM
Uploader Comment
Complete version from G-エッヂ. Some of the G-エッヂ are not shared yet.
Posted on 06 April 2023, 22:33 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +41
Author gave up with the plot didn't he?
Wife went from "somebody help me!" to "wtf I want more dicks now"
Husband from not knowing anything to suspecting something is off and jacking it off with his imagination.
Boss is just a lucky rapist.
Coworker went from "i'll protect you" to "a 3some is fine too"
Posted on 06 April 2023, 22:54 by:   BZo1480    PM
Score +40
@Wilfriback Well, considering how dumb the Hinako story got before it was basically abandoned, are you really surprised?
Posted on 06 April 2023, 23:46 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +35
@BZo1480
I wonder what the hell was wrong with Tenchuumaru to milk Hinako's story that much if he keep adding nothing anyway? At least it had a semblance of plot on the first books until the author decided to turn the scum boss into a romantic interest and deleting the husband from existence until he gave up and dropped Hinako. Well, good riddance at least I guess.
Posted on 07 April 2023, 00:29 by:   johnsmy    PM
Score +29
Thank you for the upload!

I'm irritated that I'm not going to get an ending to Hinako. I mean, I know it would probably suck but still. I've mentioned before I really feel they wrote themselves into a corner on that one. It feels like Hinako is suppose to have a happy ending with the Boss, but not make them the bad guys...which was just not going to happen. Ah it just frustrating, especially because they mentioned once or twice they'd have another chapter at one of the conventions a few years back when I was having them translated, but something always came up and now I think they've been to a convention with no mention of Hinako. Sorry bitching on a different story.

This story was okay starting out, but yeah that ending just nosedived so bad with no attempt to make any sense. I still love their drawings though.
Posted on 07 April 2023, 06:18 by:   BZo1480    PM
Score +45
@Wilfriback I doubt most of these artists have an editor that's willing to save them from themselves and they end up writing themselves into a corner like with Hinako, or that Maguro Coffee story where they pussed out on doing a sequel(which is ironically the best-selling doujin for that artist), or uyru's recent work where he punted after 9 chapters because he turned the wife's sister into the dumbest person ever.

@johnsmy Yeah, Tenchuumaru desperately needed an editor who'd bop him on the nose with a newspaper and tell him "No, this is stupid" when it came to Hinako. You can get away with idiotic stuff when it's just a nothing 20-to-30-pge one-shot, not so much when it's multiple chapters and 100+ pages.

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