This went from being one the most anticipated stories to the unsatisfying climax. Transformation is amazing in all and writing is good and the effects are top notch, but I wanted to see a bit more sex. And the ending, just seeing a man masturbated riddle with PTSD sucks.

Base +6, mettle_mettle +6, King Chicken +8, seenthat +8, Nelhew +7, Kael Hyun +9, Na2CO3 +6, Quasi-Evil_Overlord +6, Kuro-tan +12, 2007xn +6, shinkimitsu +8

i hope this gets a part 4 with more transformations,the ending is really disappointing

Base +6, Kael Hyun +9, Quasi-Evil_Overlord +6, Nelhew +7

Ending was a bit of an epilogue to the story which I find very normal, especially in a lot of books. It sets up that he is more or less slightly addicted to it now and now that he's been exposed twice he can't deny its pull and it's not safe to go back.

This also gets the idea that he has slowly been corrupted by the orb where he wants it because it feels so good, so now he has to deal with wanting it while not getting it, putting him in psychological torture. He will eventually break, if not, the orb will come to him.

It's not a satisfying massive sex party ending or anything, but that's fine. Plenty of senseless smut elsewhere here, so it's nice to have a story every once in a while. We at least know moving forward that this story is not yet done and more to come. It's also possible since he's wrapped up at home, someone else may end up stumbling upon this.

Remember, girlfriend is already with the master, so she isn't coming back. Not unless she comes back to drag Bill away, which would be an interesting turn of events.

Base +6, LimeTine +6, Nelhew +7

If you were disappointed in the ending, that's probably because there are about 30 pages missing from the end of the second part (right before the pink flame image).
They are really good! I think you can still get them by paying for Tidy Fox's patreon, although I know they had to remove them directly from the site, I'm sure if you message the creator they can send you a link.
https://www.patreon.com/user?u=40679207

Base +6, Kuro-tan +12, yupokamusi -8, dreadtasm +6, 2007xn +6

Truly this entire fucking gallery is just "a whole lot of teasing / talking but no actual fucking".
Garbage. Terrible way to advertise, if the "good parts" are actually blocked off. More than anything, this guy advertises how slowly he works.

Base +7, Kael Hyun -10