02: Nanmi => Nanami 03: i hope it's no one notices => i hope no one notices 05: soaking-wet => soaking wet 08/09/11/22: (i suggest using "~" instead of duplicating the last letter, or duplicate the previous vowel instead) 20: this is the same always > this is the same as always / this is the same, always / this is always the same 21: tasting this drug => (wrongly worded: missing reference) / tasting this / getting hook on this