This here is part 2. Thanks for that!

Part 1 (english translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2488832/9df18de2e9/

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Pages 20 and 26 have untranslated bits. Might wanna check those out.

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if you want to make a cute baby, maybe not pick the ugliest bastard you can find for the breeding program.

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guys.
we know what oji-san means. you don't have to translate that. It's awkward. Uncward.

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God damn i love this series. Need moooore!

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btw you started changing one of the character's names in the middle

004
OG: 私たちの身にもあんなことがおきると思うと
TL: "To think that it could happen to us too..."
ED: this is connected to the next line. like "when" she thinks about this happening...(cont'd)

OG: 呑気に学生生活を送る気になんてなれません
TL: "I don't think I could handle such a vile act"
ED: she's talking about being able to lead a normal student life

OG: やっぱり私たちも
TL: "We're all scared too"
ED: she's not talking about being scared (related to next line)

OG: 種付けおじさんの指導に従うしかないのかな…
TL: "Uncle's seeding, I wonder if I'll be able to follow all the instructions properly too"
ED: she's resigning to their fate, this is a continuation of the prev line

OG: せっかく八千代先輩がお茶会に招いてくれたのに
TL: "Even though you invited me to the tea party"
ED: this mistranslation is directly contradicting page 2

OG: 先輩の前であんな話するんじゃなかった
TL: "To talk about that in front of the seniors"
ED: ignoring the fact that statement is not supposed to be incomplete, she's only talking about one person

005
OG: やっぱりやめてもらうわけにはいかないですかぁ…
TL: "As I thought, you wouldn't just stop if I asked you too ahh..."
ED: not sure if "too" is a typo

006
OG: ひっ…誰かぁ…
TL: "Don't be scared"
ED: this line is made up

OG: 嬉しいなったら / 嬉しいな
TL: "When you're happy" / "Uncle is also happy"
ED: he's only talking about himself getting happier and happier

007
OG: 千百松グループの令嬢と言ったらあなたにも伝わるかしら
TL: "She's the heiress to the Senhyakumatsu Group. You should know your place before her"
ED: Chiomatsu

OG: 学園の平和を守るのはこの千百松・ルイス・英玲奈の務めですわ！！
TL: "The one who protects this school's peace is none other than Senhyakumatsu's very own Erena"
ED: she gives her full name, Chiomatsu Louise Erena

009
OG: またイッちゃう…
TL: "If you...continue..."
ED: she's saying she's cumming again

OG: 英玲奈さん！？
TL: "Miss Erina-sama?!"
ED: name change? and wrong honorific

010
OG: だから
TL: N/A
ED: this leads into her next line

OG: ごっ…後生ですわッ！！
TL: "I-I beg you!"
ED: this kind of cuts out the moral argument she's trying to make

012
OG: 英玲奈っ！ / おいしっかりしろ！ / 英玲奈っ！
TL: "your highness Erina-chan?" / "Oi! You still here?" / "Earth to Erina-chan!"
ED: name change? also the speaker's tone makes it seem like you got the wrong speaker

and so on

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The last girl that got fucked is clearly a female of culture.

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