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I get that this is a doujinshi... but it's completely out of character, and completely ignores the lore. No, that ability will never work on Misaka. Ever.

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I want see sequel they train her in an hotel

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Lmao kid that is entirely the point of hentai’s. nobody gives a rats ass whether they could do it in canon or not but yeah contrary to what you think it is actually possible provided misaka is vulnerable enough and depowered which she was here

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There's a lot here that I like, and quite a bit that I don't.

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"There's a lot here that I like, and quite a bit that I don't."
This is every single dining work for me, at least there's no scat.

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IT SHOULD'VE BEEN ME NOT HER 😭😭😭😭

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