Translated using MTL, edited and applied by Million Flower.
Sorry that in the credit, it stated that I translate it. I forgot to remove the credits and in this site, once the gallery got uploaded, it can't changed.

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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2517860/9a428405a4/
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Note: In this translation, I tried to translate most of the Japanese onomatopoeia into English onomatopoeia, and some of them I translated directly into the meaning of the onomatopoeia itself.

thank you ! you're doing god's work.

Base +16, EM1K04 +6, Demonlady -6, michiokun -3

it looks like a bunch of lines match up 1:1 with MTL

edit: at least you're disclosing your mtl usage now even though it came after the rough tl tag was added. your credits page still claims you did the translation while asking for money though

003
OG: 休めるところがあるのがありがたいわ
TL: "It's grateful that there's a place to rest"
ED: she's talking about herself

005
OG: もう恥ずかしいわね
TL: "I am already embarrassed"
ED: she isn't saying "already", she's just exasperated

006
OG: スッキリって
TL: "Peeing outside"
ED: she's hung up on the "refreshing" part

OG: そんなわけ…
TL: "What do you mean?"
ED: she's in disbelief (related to prev line)

007
OG: あの女たち野ションしてる！
TL: "Those women over there are peeing in the wild!"
ED: in public

014
OG: 肛門ヒクヒクしてる出きったかな
TL: "Her anus is twitching. I think it's all coming out"
ED: he's wondering if she's finished

OG: しかし臭くて苦くてたまらん！
TL: "But it's stinky and bitter and I can't stand it!"
ED: he's enjoying it

015
OG: そこでするの近くない？
TL: "Isn't it too far to do it there?"
ED: she's asking the opposite

OG: 来い来い！肛門おっぴろげてひり出せ！
TL: "Come on, come on! Pull out your butthole"
ED: he wants it to gape and shoot poop out

016
OG: 連れションだね / それを言うなら連れ便だね
TL: "It's a companion" / "Well, if you say so"
ED: you could've just adapted your TL note for these bubbles

020
OG: しまった声が
TL: "It got messy"
ED: he's talking about his voice coming out

Last edited on 28 April 2023, 09:02.

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