raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2153045/ebf04d0002/

Chapter 1 (english translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2344351/e5fe55f8fd/

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011
OG: よくもまぁ
TL: N/A
ED: you skipped this and just split the TL for the next line across 2 bubbles

OG: いい…
TL: "Yey"
ED: this isn't a standalone "yay"

012
OG: 岡村、結婚してるんだ？
TL: "So are you getting married?"
ED: he's asking if she is married

OG: してないわよ！知ったかぶりで悪かったわね！
TL: "I'm not! Smart ass!"
ED: she's not calling him a smart ass

013
OG: ええと…そう… / か / な?
TL: "Hmm...ye / ...ah / ha?"
ED: "hmm yeah ha" makes no sense here

014
OG: なんで岡村バンツスーツなの？
TL: "Why are you wearing a lounge suit?."
ED: it's not a lounge suit

015
OG: んな訳ないでしょ！
TL: "No way!"
ED: she's denying his gaslighting

016
OG: なんなのよここ…っまわりで
TL: "What's...with this place."
ED: missing 2nd part of line

OG: さすがに一人で来るのはつまらんし丁度イイかなって
TL: "It would have been boring, if I came here alone. But not now"
ED: "but not now" -> he's saying his idea to come to this park was a good one since he wouldn't be alone

019
OG: お〜スーツでもわかる弾力服の上から揉む位いいでしょ
TL: "Ouh.. I can feel their caliber,even with your suit on. Fondling them with your clothes on is fine,rght[sic]"
ED: he actually describes them and doesn't say "caliber" (related to pg 32)

020
OG: ちがっ
TL: N/A

024
OG: うわ〜カリ高ってこういうのかな
TL: "Uwah, this is, how an erect dick tip feels"
ED: she isn't talking about it being erect

026
OG: きもちいいっ
TL: "Does it feel good?"
ED: wrong speaker

028
OG: カリがこりって
TL: "His dick head is engulfing me"
ED: it's not engulfing her

031
OG: 仕事帰りのＯＬの蒸れたパンスト姿に突っ込むの気持ちいい～
TL: "Fucking an OL returning from work with a wet pantyhose, feels great"
ED: her pantyhose aren't wet

032
OG: さっき喉でわからされたあのカリ高で
TL: "his dick helt, I felt with my throat,"
ED: she describes it specifically using the same thing on pg 19

etc

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the end that's it he'll like what stop using it cause he got the girl he likes smh

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doujinshitranslator more like doujin shit translator

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wait this is the end? I thought he would go to all the girls in his yearbook

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Ooh nice twist

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Twisted end. but good

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Wonder if is the end or just "her" end.
As he will not call her anymore.
Is a interessting hentai because we have seen similar stuff, but usually the guy regresses to the past or somehow the girls were still all alone, instead they married or have partners.
Is a pity his school life got destroyed because of a stomacache, would have liked to see more revenge on that girl, but this was nice too.
Hopeffuly it will have more chapters, even if one for year is a long wait.

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1
RAW [Digital]: https://e-hentai.org/g/2151706/763d1cae30/
RAW [Scanned]: https://e-hentai.org/g/2152896/80726f357e/
ENG (rough TL): https://e-hentai.org/g/2344351/e5fe55f8fd/
2
RAW [Scanned]: https://e-hentai.org/g/2153045/ebf04d0002/
ENG (rough TL): https://e-hentai.org/g/2539297/a49eb568bd/ <---- You are here

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