raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/1a4904a6eb/997822-165

Please expect errors in my translations, I'm still learning.

Salam Sange.

I can only speak as a native English speaker (my Japanese level is N6), but skimming through the first few pages I see some grammatical erors:

"what did you say" -> "What did you just say"
"He just want to have sex" -> "He just wanted to have sex"

Would you like to have an English proofreader to help you? You can contact me at BonjoHiggins#1806 on Discord.

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T H I C C T O M B O Y

That final panel tho XD

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Origin:
DLSite: https://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ114180.html

Artist:
Twitter: https://twitter.com/u_n_o_u
Fanza: https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/list/=/article=maker/id=24805/

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>Slut
Dropped

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Fun little grammar lesson for ESL people in the last panel:
"You're into tomboys too" or "You are into tomboys too" is a proper sentence with the irregular "to be" verb. It means the sentence describes something, like the sentence "you are tall"

The follow up "who doesn't" uses "to do" which is the generic for to basically every verb EXCEPT "to be". You either do something, or you are something. In English, the two concepts are very distant from each other. So here the response should be "who isn't" instead of "who doesn't". Alternatively, the following works:

"You like tomboys too" (verb here is "to like" and is not "to be")
"Who doesn't?" (verb here is the generic "to do" which applies to "to like" and not "to be")

Now the English speakers will understand the last page, but it's not just colloquially incorrect, it's actually just bad grammar, because the generic "to do" points to "to be" which never really works.

Last edited on 07 May 2023, 17:46.

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I was hoping she would fall for senpais dick and become his girlfriend. No such luck

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Hmm, should here be the domination loss tag?

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