Tried to make my early amateurish works better. Still learning so if anyone has any tips to further improve they are welcome to do so.
Better Raws, more natural TL and much better typeset for each page.
I'm not sure if this is the correct way to update, so I'll wait for someone to confirm before uploading other works I've gone back to and changed.

why did the boyfriend had to look at me like that... that was creepy

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1. You need to set your antialiasing to Smooth. Check at the top when you use a text layer in Photoshop. Your text is crazy jittery right now.
2. Your text is often way too big.
3. You need to punctuate (commas and periods.)
4. You often don't completely clean out bubbles and leave dust in them (remnants of JP text.)
5. Add a white stroke to floating text (text outside bubbles that overlap with the background.)

Here's guides.

General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

Last edited on 07 January 2023, 21:27.

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this artist is too good thanks for translating his work

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Hentai:

Ten years for rape?! HAX! XD

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@cutegyaru yea i did these translation just for fun before deciding to upload. if i continue to translate i'll put in more effort

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So in the end, the detective who interrogated the guy is able to actually fuck her or is that just like a delusion?

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The old African rapist in Japan meme

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It's a low quality x1280 downscale on top of everything. Half pages instead of double pages.

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hope you people like it!

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Then the detective is fated to become the coach's jail mate lmao

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ALWAYS REMEMBER TO LAWYER UP THE COPS ARE NOT YOUR FRIENDS

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Lol this like some NTR inception stuff here.

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Is rape that serious of a crime? Lol

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GuroLover12, are you serious or meme-ing?

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this art gives a low quality vibe but holy shit I've cummed buckets to this guy's works.

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To be honest... if you give the impression you repent here... a rape could be 2 to 4 years.
The evidence on top of his attitude sealed his fate.
.... Also, don't rape ppl...

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Dumbass: Lol here's what I did in full detail, including multiple counts of drugging and sexual assault.

Judge: You seem like an unrepentant and repulsive person, I sentence you to the maximum amount I'm allowed to.

Dumbass: Shocked Pikachu face.

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@ShadowDude112 I think it's the boyfriend, judging by his hairstyle. As for why he had a threatening look, the coach was obviously jealous of him so I guess he saw him as an enemy.

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It's a sad story. I honestly can't judge this guy. A lot of people in his shoes wouldn't be able to take it. It seems to me that there should be some rule of law mitigating punishment in such situations.

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