Nice art but awkward plot.

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Happy birthday!

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Chinese: https://e-hentai.org/g/1674147/1bdaaec19c/
Korean: https://e-hentai.org/g/1653526/c3f8e031da/
Spanish: https://e-hentai.org/g/2170903/0e313c43ee/

Origin: https://book.dmm.co.jp/product/938034/s011akamj00240/

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Some editing guides for you, especially on redrawing.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials

Also, you need to level your pages when the colors are faded. Check guide here:

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/902314557077336064/997654450149789757/optimize_image.jpg

Base +23, Shiro_ Ecchi +10, TheBrojangles +6

This manga seems like to cater to both female and male fantasies that are most of the time unrealistic. It caters to women in the sense that there will be a handsome high value man for them when they're about to enter the phase in their life that their looks are about to fade, and it caters to men in regards to the classic purity fantasy. Let's face it, in real life you will rarely find woman who hasn't played the field when they're at that age and full time career woman (no judgment, just how the modern dating market is), and women who wait this long will rarely find a confident good-looking tall dependable high value guy that late in life. There are exceptions, but those don't make the rule.

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me trying to find 1 (one) comment section without incel thesis intros:

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Don't mind me, just pass by and leave a compliment on the detailed background work. This guy's skill is way better than many manga artists nowaday.

Base +6, Chubgp +7, talking_goat +12, fando32 +5

Don't worry, Forgunia. We aren't gonna start believing in girls that can grow a penis overnight from a potion, smartphone apps that hypnotize people and guys suddenly waking up in a female body in the morning, etc... just because we read those things in ero manga. Imagine the kind of wild things we would believe in ero manga without you, golly...

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So, is her name Kario or Orika?

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@Nicosai: Kario is her last name, Orika is her first name.

Base +30, minnazzo +8, MechWarriorNY +11

"No-one's gonna bat an eye when a 32-year old woman walks by on the street." - Orika-san.

PAGE 15.

Jodou-kun: "Allow me to introduce myself as a True Man Of Culture."

AND IT IS GLORIOUS (as is to be expected of Bota Mochito).

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Didn’t realize how much cuteness a squishable face could add until reading this doujin.

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