I WANT TO TELL YOU THAT YOU'VE BEEN FORCED TO CLEAN MY CLASSMATE'S COCK WITH MY MOUTH.
I WANT TO TELL YOU THAT I'VE BEEN MADE TO CLEAN MY CLASSMATE'S COCK IN A CIRCLE.

The machine translator is having existential crisis on who's sucking whose cock p16-p17

Last edited on 17 May 2023, 19:07.

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Ugh. Why is there still no Machine Translation tag.

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@ Empty Something like:
"Language:English MTR"

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I find it scary. I've been told to clean my classmate's cock with his mouth! My gawd reading it is quite gruesome.

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Tip for anyone who IS trying to make sense of it. Japanese doesn't make extensive use of pronouns, and when it does, those pronouns do not in and of themselves convey gender. You instead are supposed to rely more on context to determine who is doing what. As such, it is best not to read too much into pronoun mixups.

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... Whoever translate it really doesn't know how to do it... 0 stars (and not just in the sex department..)

Still, i rather prefer this than any of the other sex stories though (even if some are renmerry), but still... I found it worrysome for the two, i mean... Sumireko saw after waking up the stream of her being raped by that student, and since the ending was left open, i imagine that she got horny for it, or she did the responsible thing and called the teachers to expel him (but she would be in detention for sleeping in club hours), but hey, she's still a high schooler. That, and also the whole "soul trapped in gensokyo" thing, since while her soul is still nice and chatting with her "friends" in gensokyo, her body is still being used like a puppet for sexual deeds, and she didn't know it until she woken up for a second or third time...

But Renko and Maribel? Well, unlike Sumireko who's a heavy sleeper and didn't notice the sex, those two people from the Inn needed to result of using sleeping pills to make them sleep, and while it did work and both secret sealing girls fell asleep like logs (and that Renko was safe on her sleep because... she's renko, and probably was dreaming of something dumb), Merry still has the powers to go through gensokyo or any area in that perimether on her dreams, and while it wouldn't be a problem if she slept normaly (or if she actually ate the pills just for her to sleep, knowing that she want to visit it the place more (like this fanfiction would tell us:https://archiveofourown.org/works/33415507/chapters/83004622 ) she was tricked to eat the pills, not knowing that they were in the food, actually, she wasn't even tricked at all, because she and renko just got invited to the inn and saw the food, and since doing occult work would make someone hungry, naturally they gave themselves into the food without giving a second choice at all (even Renko's pupils in page 20 show hearts, while mostly used when it come to love or even yandere works, here she just see the food and wants to eat it... I think that Renko is more into eating than having love relationships, i mean, just look at her phsysic.)

It kinda makes me wonder, What did Maribel was doing on her dream while her body was assaulted?

I also found out that Renko's quite "innocent" when it comes to the sex, and notices that her wetting her underwear was just because she overdrank the alocohol instead of being harrased (something that Maribel lacks, since after that, she got to "judgemental" of any men, and wants to protect Renko's innocence so nothing can happen to her too...)

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