Hey everyone! I hope you enjoy my second work! I really appreciate all of the nice comments and messages people have sent to me regarding my first upload. I think I also underestimated the amount of aggregators that pull from e-hentai haha.

I spent quite a lot of effort making this one, I went through it quite a bit more thoroughly than I had my previous work, and I found that even though it was double the pages the amount of time I spent on it grew exponentially. I found a lot of your kind comments were enough to boost me to continue working on it!

I learnt a lot from creating this one, and I think you can actually see the change in technique as the pages go forward. I was tossing up going back and re-doing the older pages to match up with the quality of the later pages but I had already spent quite a lot of time on this work so I decided to only touch them up.

Regardless,

Thank you for reading and I love you!

I dunno... looks like AI stuff.

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NICE WORK😋

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Your art and anatomy is good but your choice of shots and angles really elevates it!
The textures get a lot better later on too, but its harder to do in black and white.
Well done, also messing with her mind and letting her be conscious and defiant of the control is top tier.

disregard if its just traced ai art though but even so, your choice of shots is good

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AI generated

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靠文本拯救的創作天才

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AI generated, you can clearly see on Page 16 the hairstyle is totally different

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@op: don't forget to put [AI GENERATED] in the tittle

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Also, if it turns out it wasn't AI stuff, please recategorize it as western, instead of Misc

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Damn this is nice, I would like a sequel tbh.

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AI or not its not bad

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Had a good time, love mind control content, and the MC used his powers well! AI was fairly consistent too! Loved it!

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好怪。。

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It looks alright in some pages but her face and especially hair get all over the place, and the hands will just come out wrong. Not too bad when they're in the background but when they're groping the boob it's a little discomforting.

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Ignoring comments about AI, this is great and I would love to see more of it. I was a little disappointed to see that the "hypnotized expression" from the beginning of the mind control had not continued as intensely once the sexual stuff began. The blank face almost crossed eyes, and tears was altogether amazing and I'd love to see that face on them through the whole story.

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What an interesting retelling of the Nibelungenlied

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I swear, some people will whine about AI art no matter how hot it is. This is damn good OP! And it obviously took plenty of work too

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这种具有实验性的本子我认为是很有意义的

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Would love a Part 2!

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