First try at translation, straight ahead and no editing, i hope you enjoy.

*Fixes done thanks to orasmase, thank you for the useful comments*

Please support the artist or the industry if you can

Last edited on 29 May 2023, 15:13.

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I'm no longer surprised anymore by these types of translations, since they happen daily at this point; I'm just disappointed.

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First try or amateur translations should be a tag or category at this point so I can block it.

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08: endedup => ended up
09: youve => you've
09: sqeal => squeal
12: I m => I'm
13: Its' => It's
14: hight => high
15: tellsomeone => tell someone
15: don' t => don't
15: rip him out her => rip him out of her
15: Thisway => This way
16: Yui chan => Yui-chan
18: r eally => really
19: I was hard to let it out => It was hard to let it out (?)
20: Some... thing's... => Something... is...
21: feelsbetter => feels better
21: use her's => use hers
22: Me... => I... (?)
22: outof => out of
22: Not only => That's not all.
23: pussi => pussy
24: My pussy... She barely got in... I started to cum already => She just... put it in my pussy... I'm already coming
26: Seing => Seeing / Look (?)
27: pro active => proactive
27: under stand => under-stand
27: o nee-chan => onee-chan

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Don't discourage the kid. Get better. At least they use the correct form of "you're" and "too." That's more than I get from a lot of native English speakers.

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This better not all be the same person uploading under multiple accounts.

If you are going to do stuff like this, do it on really old uploads because all you are doing is making it so these won't get proper translations in the future.

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tagging based on @orasmase

Also, pretty sure COMIC Unreal is FAKKU.

Last edited on 28 May 2023, 23:18.

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@cutegyaru

COMIC Unreal is not FAKKU...
They did release some books that came from COMIC Unreal but they don't translate this as part of their subscription. If they did the translations would be nuked from this site.

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People are allowed to post sub-par efforts/results.

People are allowed to be upset at sub-par efforts/results.

Seems balanced to us. The only question is ; what is the point where it counts as spam? There should probably be a rule around the lines of:
"new translators have to post the script in the forums or something for approval". Mistakes are natural, carelessness is not.

p.s If the poster fixes the mistake post-haste there is no foul, but if they cared about such things they would have checked it in the first place.

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What's wrong with this translation to get downvoted/rated so low? It's readable enough to me, I'm not here to play spelling bees

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As i see the translation is kinda bad, but it is better to have bad one, then to hove none. So thanks for your work here. Try better next time

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Better to have a bad one by an author that tries than a bad one by an author who doesn't give a shit.
At least this author is trying.

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Well, the worst part of the translation for me was that they mistranslated the "middle school uniform" on Page 14 as "high school uniform." Not only does that not make sense, it's nowhere near as hot.

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