I've always wanted to try something like this, and this work looked like a fun opportunity. The existing translation is sadly worse than Google Translate, but the original work was actually pretty fun to read! So I hope I could get that across.

This is my first time translating a doujin, so I'm sure there are many problems. Even tho I don't know if I'll do something like this again, I'd appreciate criticism.

Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/2427572/95f1c04a46/
English (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2559375/56ea27d235/

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Finally a proper translation. You're doing God's work here, man

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Thanks for a good translation! Always happy to see them, especially when others aren't great. :D

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Thank you so much for the comprehensible translation, other one should just be deleted.

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@OnceForAll I dunno why you bother linking the other one. It's gibberish.

Base +6, qBitZero -8

this is so wholesome

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