Office girls are too sexy.

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Beyond the grammar and machine translation you also used the wrong 1280x downsized resolution and your typesetting is questionable to say the least.

p.2 mid-career > this doesn't mean anything. how can she be "mid-career" when she's 23??
p.6 NG > ?
p.7 who have lower salary than me > a lower salary/get paid less than I do
p.7 to touch > the touch/being touched
p.8 you have good manners > this expression is completely out of place
p.9 this is bad here in the public > the public would refer to an audience. IN public
p.10 ettiquette
p.11 But please don't be the one to pull my leg > another complete out of place expression.
p.12 isn't this just regular massage > a
p.15 you've been squeezing my fingers stronger and stronger > harder
p.18 cunnilinngus

etc

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