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I really liked it. A group od domination power trip with mind control. My only issues are how the body modifications gets cartoonishly fucked up at times (which was a bit of a turn off) and how fast the story moved early on). Still not sure why wendy got that black eye if dipper could just control her.

Base +6, Larae -4, NevskyDrift +18, bobistherock +7

A bit slower progression, maybe adding in panels in between would be nice.
As a follow up, if we are talking plot-driven, it could be the bell of imagination was a trap set by Bill in case he lost, meant to slowly weaken the barrier and minds of those in Gravity Falls so he could return.

Base +8