Granblue specific terminology: Sage -> Evoker (in a few places, e.g. Page 4, 27)
Other stuff: Page 6 - you wrote "It's way bigger than a human dick" here, but the captain in this appears to be human (no horns that would indicate he's a Draph). Haven't checked the raw, but did the author write another race here perhaps, like Erune? Page 11 - "even when you're in heat, Nia" -> "even when you're in heat, Nier"