Good and bad day to get angry and self-insert in a hentai dounjhi

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Thanks for the update! Hmm… a bit of a hit or Miss (leaning to the latter. I wonder if it was last chapter or this was the chapter sensei hired an assistant for help) in the art for this update. The early Yuki and Shoma panels feels like it should connect with the extra panels/pages of the first tankoubon. I’m not sure which one goes first but they clearly have the same hairstyles so this is what I assume to be the time they got together as a couple. Can’t believe sensei was even able to insert chibi panels on a supposed serious scene (my impression).

For the smut, personally liked the boob job panels. Blowjob was okay, prefer chapter 23s bj panels really. Only the cum filled mouth was noteworthy. But I’d give this chapter a 3.5 tbh (4 due to using a phone so not sure if I could vote in between). Higher than last chapter but previous one had better art for me (and last one felt like some character motivational/resolution chapter so the good art was understandable). Yuki and Coach’s faces/head drawn are the closest victim in art for me this update. Yuki doesn’t feel off as much but Coach’s is all over the place, weird size head or back to him looking older than usual. Shoma looks okay on his limited appearance.

I got spoiled on 29 at some threads on H——dex and according to that user, Shoma couldn’t take the vid. Well, the smut ain’t over this update and we could still get offscreen vid (or a reveal in the future. Niimi and Kuruso are also extra factors who either know or have an idea) while the scene was focusing on Yuki and Coach. Personally worse than usual NTR tropes if Shoma couldn’t take the vid when the device is literally right at his hand just one button left to press. He was not listening to a phone call unable to help beyond his control nor was he jacking off witnessing the scene in front of his eyes. He literally came there for a purpose and if he couldn’t take a vid at this update or next, I’d laugh. After all that resolution last chapter or the first pages here. Its a win for me though if there’s more chapters

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The biggest NTR here is the author making the readers believe Shoma being competent if he ends up being the standard dumbass.

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The art deteriorated so much. :

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Thank you for the upload!!

Forgive me I used Papago to translate this and was Shoma there to record it? I thought he was there to SEE Yuki as she "really" is and if he had issues with it he was suppose to call people about what was going on? i also have a feeling Shoma isn't going to rat them out. i think ti will be the girl he was with after Yuki to help him. i think the author has a kinda popular Fantasy Mainstream Manga right now which was taking time from this hence the long breaks and irregular art in I feel the last chapter as well. I feel like they're finally winding this one down partially because of that. My impression is that this series has all but disappeared from their twitter accept for announcements of book releases(not a consistent twitter checker so I might have missed posts).

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Good to see you again @johnsmy!

I have to agree with you, it really does feel like the priority is her fantasy series and checking some of sensei’s old posts, I think she intends to take on another series as a favor from an old friend/acquaintance. Heck, the tankoubon version of this series will be stopping at Vol.04 apparently (which will be released November this year. It’s 6 chapters of the series per volume so despite the only available post here is the first book, it’d be weird if they follow from the main source to a T since it’ll end on Eri’s masturbation chapter which is 24. There is a chance the book could spoil the ending or the series itself will end alongside it on November). Btw, the Papago translations say Shoma was there just to be a witness and show Yuki he can accept her? I thought it was the other way around and Yuki brought up the idea (according to other site discussions). Then, why would he need a phone on hand at that moment?

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@Hypothon - I'll be here till the end. I think Sensei stretched the ending a little to long, but the I did enjoy most of it. Yeah Papago translation didn't really make sense to me either. I don't have access to it at the moment, if I remember according to Papago Shoma says something like "But what if I can't handle what I see. and then Yuki says I don't know, call the police or a teacher. Something like that. It figured I was missign some context that Papago had missed. Since he wasn't taking video right away I started thinking maybe it was kinda right and Yuki's inner thoughts didn't seem to be her expecting him to record it and show it. It seemed to be more "See me how I really am". I

I'm not really sure where she's going with the plot right now, but it does feel like we're entering the last chapters and I'm thinking you are probably right about it ending in November or maybe a little earlier. for volume 4. I feel like were going to see Yuki and Shoma together at the end, but I'm wondering how she's going to write off the Coach. I mentioned earlier, especially with this chapter, I don't feel like Shoma will be the one getting rid of the coach. Maybe Coach getting caught when the one girl who is super into him trying to seduce and them getting caught in a compromising situation, I think because of Shoma's ex-girlfriends getting rid of the coach for his happiness. Now if Airi Katsura could finish their series...Jimmney Christmas talk about a hot mess.

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