I think I fixed most of the stuffs. I'm sorry if you guys see any errors.

Edit: There's no textless version of BJ scene and the glassless version is a complete redraw of korean translator.

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That was really hot. She has such a... Weird personnality, but i think it's great !

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Glancing over, there are still a lot of random full stops and crossbar I should only be used for the personal pronoun “I”. Also, you can edit a gallery instead of creating a new one :)

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@Fistonladin the power of emotionless

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>I think I fixed most of the stuffs.
Nah. You just "fixed" what I pointed out, which was a fraction of your mistakes (you actually added more mistakes on the same pages, and that's hilarious). I'm not surprised you stopped where I stopped.

Also you can update your galleries, just saying.

p.7 Commitee
p.8 there appear
p.9 your tits what H cup is it
p.11 where would you like? > like... to what?
p.12 after she clean
p.15 did you heard
p.15 i heard she's got H cup > cups
p.15 use me to your desire > as you desire (sounds bad either way)
p.16 after Yamada-san calmed down > calms
p.17 i used up all condoms

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Sorry for the errors @cutegyaru, but I'm not giving up until I can walk again lol. Still, at this point just point out all the mistakes bro. Really wish I translate this in my own language, but all I got is a laptop with only English alphabets printed on the keys, a mouse, and a fucking touch keyboard. I know I'm making excuses. if I'm going to make my own language translation, it would take me a full 5 minutes just to click all the vowels, the alphabets, and customizing the fonts just to form a text bubble. I also used Grammarly (Yes, that site in the ad) to check most of the text, So I thought it might be decent enough.

Look man, really sorry for bad English and the typos. Just comment all the mistakes I made, I'll fix it when TRY update this series.

Edit: I don't really see any problem you pointed at on page 8, 9, and 15 (cup).

Last edited on 16 June 2023, 10:22.

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"but I'm not giving up until I can walk again lol".
You're walking? All I see is you consistently taking one step forward and then proceeding to fall and tumble two steps back.

"Still, at this point just point out all the mistakes bro."
Ever heard of "The Ship of Theseus"? At what point is it even your translation if cutegyaru is pulling all the legwork.
At that point they may as well just do it on their own, if they weren't backlogged with all the constant MTLs & ESL translations, so get in line "bro".
Your mistakes, your problems to fix, and your responsibility to fix them. Don't wait on the goodwill of others.
Learn English and Japanese if you want to translate because Grammarly is just a band-aid fix when you already have a poor foundation.

"Really wish I translate this in my own language, but all I got is a laptop with only English alphabets printed on the keys, a mouse, and a fucking touch keyboard. I know I'm making excuses."
Sounds like a you problem. You're definitely making excuses and bad ones at that. If you wanted to translate into your own language just add the language to your keyboard layout, you muppet.

And this all circles back from the decensored version of this work: https://e-hentai.org/g/2576235/f272561957/
Literal first sentence is "Hello, shitty translator here."
What a ride.

Edit:
I'm not telling you to give up. I'm telling you to learn the languages you're translating from and to.
The fact you went from " I'm not giving up" to "Okay, okay, geez I gave up alr" says all I need to know.
You didn't understand my "The Ship of Theseus" point:
If cutegyaru were to point out all your mistakes it would most likely border on being innumerable.
At that point cutegyaru would have basically made their own translation. If they gave you all the mistakes, you would have contributed little and have essentially poached his translation.
And don't say "I never intended to copy his ship or make him craft a whole ship" when you did just that with this gallery: no acknowledgment of their contribution or credit was given for previous fixes.

You don't need a keyboard with the language you want to translate into printed onto the keys to translate. *Facepalms*
If you don't want the growing pains of learning to type via a digital keyboard layout that's on you.
If you both don't have the keyboard you desire and aren't willing to deal with the alternative, then translating isn't going to happen; all you're doing now is venting your frustrations.

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Okay, okay, geez I gave up alr?

@Vanilla Cream I think that the "The Ship of Theseus" statement you make is exaggerated. I only ask him to point out the mistakes I made because he's definitely more experienced than I am. I never intended to copy his ship or make him craft a whole ship. Hell, I don't even know what his ship's color is. I just made a simple boat; he noticed it and criticized me for being a dumbass who built a boat out of wet wood. Since he had time to check and point out the errors, I might as well ask for his help. Yes, I should've been more careful. Yes, I shouldn't wait for the good will of others. Yes, I should take responsibility for my own actions. However, I only act like that toward things that actually matter to me.

Also, @Vanilla Cream, the reason why I can't type shit in my language is because my laptop only has the English alphabet printed on the button. Did you see the Thai or Hindi keyboard layout? Those languages have like 40+ alphabets and 10-20+ vowels. Imagine typing while guessing which button is which alphabet on an English-only keyboard, it's feel like playing Twister when you're colorblind. The on-screen keyboard is slow as shit, so I only use it as a last resort.

I am really sorry if you think that my translation ruined the source material or disrespected the artist themselves; that wasn't my intention. I'm just a dude in a wheelchair who one day got a random thought about translating doujinshis. I won't update this series anymore since I'm going to make more errors anyway. I hope other translators pick up this series when it's update. In the mean time, please support TRY. If yall can't even spare a buck for his work, just go to kemono.party.

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Last edited on 20 June 2023, 10:30.

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no one gives a fuck about what cutegyaru think stop thinking about it dude.

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Lmao some hentai snob really ruined it for the rest of us huh. You're looking at titties drawn on paper. Get a grip dude.

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well shit i really liked this fuckin loser scared the TL off

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