basically put a d*ck on a girl and called it a boy

Base +7, Werefoofle -6, Adnarelle -6, MehMeher +6, Dopeswaggu -6, MamaWeegee -7, lurkm0ar +6, PervertedGhost -6, xangaisdead -6, BupB0i -4, sadiadfssdfsdfsdf -6, highmark -6, Ibishima -7, and 19 more...

In my opinion, overall the better translation. Good job on properly eliminating the "-kun"s and on using largely more natural language.

Base +6, Net Imp -8, Black Paladin 666 -7, Lunarry +6

I saw this in the raw first, and was terribly confused by the second page. It took about ten seconds before my brain went, "oh... that was one hell of a bra." I thought they had zapped themselves with a TG gun.

Base +13, alllifeinfate +6

So its Heterosexual with extra steps

Base +6, Zblayde -6, wewladdo -6, granojo84 +6

danm this shit was good

Base +6, granojo84 -6, Quackytheduck +28, Dinosars +8

So or more damn the feminine, I see that the girl wears the pants of the relationship ha ha ha

Base +7