RAW: https://e-hentai.org/s/bdae3364e4/2346919-87

EDIT: fixed typo on page 4,5,15,16.

Small typo page 5, he says let's try to igure this out, should be figure
funny story, all part of the plan to bring her back

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"Don't do it you twat"

lol

Also a few more typos
pg 4 - "i can't get out" - non capitalised I
on pg 15 "fells like your" - "feels like you're"
pg 16 - "bacause" - "because"

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The author completely missed the opportunity to have the guy modify her. He didn't even try a right click.

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Not to be “that guy” but is the “sleeping” tag correct for this? Her soul/mind is separated and both have shared senses.

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That ending... was worth it though ( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

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He could've just pull an Animator vs Woman using After Effects smh

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@Nonus It's close enough. If you turned off the monitor, her IRL body would still remain comatose.

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Ah, just like I planned. Your welcome. *ejected*

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This author's works are pretty funny

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