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[Fuzuii Undou (Fuzui)] Taiho Shichauzo! Mesugaki Police 24-Ji [English]

[不随意運動 (不随)] 逮捕しちゃうぞっ! メスガキポリス24時 [英語]

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Posted:2023-06-24 14:07
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Language:English  
File Size:45.65 MiB
Length:34 pages
Favorited:1556 times
Rating:
320
Average: 4.41

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Posted on 24 June 2023, 14:07 by:   永远威严的幼月    PM
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From dlsite: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01066921.html

translated by fuzui himself
Posted on 24 June 2023, 14:16 by:   lurphysmaw    PM
Score +150
I don't see what Faceless Oji-san is complaining about, being "sentenced to life imprisonment in Lolicon prison". That just means being surrounded daily by plenty of brats who need "correcting".
Posted on 24 June 2023, 14:16 by:   PuniPuniKill    PM
Score +242
"Country run by Mesugaki"

bro i don't know hell or heaven but all I know they to be corrected 💢💢💢
Posted on 24 June 2023, 14:59 by:   TacoTako    PM
Score +149
You really need a proofreader.
Posted on 24 June 2023, 16:55 by:   thirdpearl    PM
Score +98
ojisan police brutality, country correction is needed 💢💢
Posted on 24 June 2023, 19:20 by:   newtype711    PM
Score +55
Ah english, the trap of planet Earth.

Lolicon prison can mean prison FOR lolicons which can range between Heaven and Hell, or prison OF lolicons which would
just be a prison full of disgusting Blue-balled guys.

Yeah, good luck buddy.
Posted on 24 June 2023, 22:48 by:   EllincedeT    PM
Score +96
Uohhhhhhhhh! 😭 DAMN CHILD 💢💢💢💢 NEED CORRECTION.
Posted on 24 June 2023, 23:46 by:   Kaito sakine    PM
Score +120
day xxx asking for msgk tag 💢💢💢
Posted on 25 June 2023, 01:26 by:   Ahegaosensei    PM
Score -10
Did TV-Nihon translate this?
Posted on 25 June 2023, 03:08 by:   RapidBlast    PM
Score +60
Apparently it's the translation from Fuzui himself.
I really like Fuzui's works, but his English is just horrible. This was a rough read. He should let it get translated by professionals imo, unless he manages to take the effort to properly learn English.

Other than that this project's plot is quite interesting. A world that is ruled by Mesugakis. Fuzui's mind must be severely based to come up with such an idea.
Posted on 25 June 2023, 04:21 by:   lurphysmaw    PM
Score +64
Japanese raw, in case another group wants an unofficial crack at translating this into English or other languages: https://e-hentai.org/g/2578720/31164387b9/
Posted on 25 June 2023, 12:53 by:   yetsun    PM
Score +114
I lol'ed when the cop brat placed handcuffs around the guys dick.

💢💢 It's not just the brats, grammar needs correction too. 💢💢
Posted on 26 June 2023, 06:30 by:   Ahegaosensei    PM
Score +24
@RapidBlast it's pretty funny to me how well it nails that kind of 2000s super-amateur orientalist feel though (despite coming from a JP author). To be fair, his English is better than my Japanese...
Posted on 26 June 2023, 21:56 by:   inerg    PM
Score +15
Tired of pussy after just 2 mesugakis? Dead giveaway he's a lolicon and isn't doing this for the first time. He should rot in prison.
Posted on 29 June 2023, 05:50 by:   Blopa    PM
Score +14
Tried reading the very first sentence and already have a headache.
Posted on 02 July 2023, 03:39 by:   junk123455    PM
Score +10
I'm getting a double headache, that neon green isn't easy on the eyes.
Posted on 02 July 2023, 12:28 by:   onilink29    PM
Score +12
I can salute the effort of the Author in trying to translate his hentai himself, but yeah it's not very good, but hey maybe he'll get better with time
Posted on 03 July 2023, 11:02 by:   Caerion    PM
Score +18
"Mesugaki accounted for half of the country's population"
I hope it's because adults are having a ton of kids rather than the other possibility
Posted on 10 July 2023, 06:38 by:   kr0tch    PM
Score +12
really needs rough grammar tag, really hard to read.
Posted on 14 July 2023, 14:06 by:   48625anon    PM
Score +6
Terrible translation but I can get the gist so it's better than no translation. art is great
Posted on 07 August 2023, 21:07 by:   sadflyersfan    PM
Score +12
soyface on pg 18

soyface on pg 18
Posted on 14 February 2024, 18:01 by:   BigJohnny    PM
Score +6
This is the future mesugakis want for you. Be vigilant.
Posted on 28 October 2024, 17:40 by:   Olkdes    PM
Score +6
Please I ask you, make a sequel where ojii-san join the others ojiisans in the prison and becomes the leader of a resistance, aiming to overthrow the evil government of msgks and instaure a new ojiisan regiment, one where all msgks are their walking onaholes!

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