Source: https://fantia.jp/posts/2014044
Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2592164/cacb24671b/
Proper english TL: https://e-hentai.org/g/2595074/eb140eb4b0/

Unfortunately the story has not been fully released yet

100% guaranteed to be at least 19.7% faithful to the original script

thank you for this pure unadultared absolute cringe

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Okay I get that this is supposed to be a rewrite. But what I don't get is how is the old guy using current slang like "rizz" He's 40 he's old. He's not going to be using terms from a generation half his age let alone know what they are. I'm probably thinking about this too much.

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"Incel beta male cuck manlet with no rizz"
Now that's a good resume

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It is a "translation" alright the gist of what they were originally saying is there. Funny as fock i recon.

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I mean this in the sincerest way possible: please kill yourself.

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@Wreckthatchick
"I don't get is how is the old guy using current slang like "rizz"" - He's obviously watching a bunch of dating advice podcasts.

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